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hi, i really like your fic. kakashi is just too cute. :D although i find him a bit too ooc. just a question though, from what i've watched of naruto, kakashi usually have this perverted blush and giggle habit when reading icha icha paradise. if he doesn't fully understand the book, why that gleeful countenance? of course your work is purely fictional so i'm just wondering how you'll factor this particular behavior.

i'm looking forward to the next installment of this fic. :) have to say that you sure work fast. and you have a pretty good grammar and quirky style too.

ja!

I don't know, for putting all theses issues into one complicated mental walkthrough you're doing quite well.
Much better than I would be doing. Poor poor Iruka, I pity him when Kakashi finally figures everything out.
Keep up the great goodness!
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Oh! I like this story and paring a lot! ^_^ this is really good. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! ^_~*

i still looooooooooooove you *hugs*
you are an amazing writer. the humor and the sarcasm, the inner dialogue of iruka and kakashi...Tsunade!!!
oh my god, *bows down in worship*
pleeeease i beg of you, i scrape my knees on molten lava as i crawl my miserable form to your heavenly feet.
continueeee!!!

The scene where Kakashi hugs and goes to Tsunade for advice surprised me at first. I didn't think that he would go to her for advice and comfort. Well, but the scene was sweet and Kakashi is just adorable!! Hehe now that he decided to ask iruka about sex between two men, I just can't wait to see Iruka's reaction. Lol.

OMG!! XD *dies laughing* that was hilarious. everyone in the library must think i'm odd now. this is just getting better and better. i can't wait for your next update.

"if a penis is meant to be put into a woman, where would two men put it?"
Gosh, I LOVE that sentence! I laughed my ass off when I first read it *goes away laughing again*
Okay, So my friend started reading this fic and she, as well as I, adores Kakashi.
Now go on and update. Now.

/Ciar

Heh heh! Nice touch with Tsunade, it added some nice humor when things where getting a little moody serious. Plus, she would make the best choice is Kakashi needed someone to talk to that wasn't Iruka. Couldn't really see him talking to Asuma, Genma, Gai, etc. with guys being guys and all. Can't wait to see how Iruka explains gay sex to Kakashi. My only complaint is that the chapter was so short! Waaaahhhh!

Wow! I had to check this out since Houseki was squealing about how wonderful it was, and I must say I agree. I love your insights into Kakashi's situation, as well as Iruka's. You made the story fairly light-hearted, but also serious with the obvious confusion Kakashi and Iruka feel. And it makes perfect sense that Kakashi would be unfamiliar with sex or even just basic attraction to another person. I also love how sensual Iruka is turning out to be.
Your writing style is also to be commended. It's wonderful and easy to read and understand. I haven't come across any grammar or spelling mistakes, which is amazing, believe me. I have my beta there just to catch all the stupid stuff, I keep missing everytime I reread through a new chapter of mine. And the fact that you've been updating daily is absolutely fabulous. I can't wait to read more. ^_^

Wow. I really hope this goes on for as long as you think it will.
My Kaka/Iru Addiction needs to be fed regularly.
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Keep it up!