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i'm so glad you update eveyday *cries tears of joy* i will wait for th next chapter

Another wonderful chapter. I am really enjoying the insights into these characters and your insight into what the characters are thinking and feeling. I can understand what you meant when you could not end the story in the last chapter. You have the layout in your mind and even though it would have been the perfect set up for it, there is more too it that we cant see yet. You have a wonderful style of writing and I cant wait to see the next chapter. Its also nice to know I can help keep you sane. *grins*

This is an interesting perspective of Kakashi's development that I haven't seen explored. As opposed to the all-knowing, god-like Kakashi we usually see, this one is confused and charming, if no less dangerous. I've always liked the pairing, but this fic is so unexpected that I look forward to every update. On that note, thank you for updating so fast. I'm hooked.

I really like this story, very hee hee ;)worthy. I don't know if your theory about Kakashi would hold up under scientific analyisis, but it seem logical. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I think that your theory on Kakashi's sexual development is believable. Porn books aside, I don't think he focused too much on sex or relationships, I don't think his life allowed him to think too much about it. I mean, he was a Jounin at age 10; his development has to be skewed, even slightly (I think we can clearly see that in the manga and anime :P )

Anyway, I'm really liking this story. I like the interaction between these two. It's so refreshing from reading Iruka as a major seme and Kakashi as being super dominant. I like Kakashi's characterisation, particularly. I like that he has no clue what he's feeling. It's very entertaining to watch as he slowly finds out what he's feeling.

Wow.......Actually, I hadn't thought of that last chapter as controversial at all. I'm just enjoying the story. Kudos, by the way. Most people probably would've ended the story right then with some sort of romantic epiphany and perhaps a gratuitous love scene. Great to know you're not taking the easy way out. I think it's great that you're taking the more realistic path and having Iruka step Kakashi through his long-delayed sexual development (and that Iruka's being a little sexy about it instead of treating Kakashi like some broken child that needs nuturing). I've read several stories where Kakashi's being forced to mentally growup at such a young age (coupled with other issues) ended up warping his sexual development, but this is the first one where it pretty much stopped all together. It's awesome to find a fresh take on the whole idea. So, ignore all bad reviews. They're obviously narrow-minded heathens. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow...Go Iruka! Was he the one leaving the scrolls? Or was that Naruto?
Great job! Keep it up.
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O.O!! *huggles you madly* must have more chapters *eye twitch*

OMG!! JUST LUV IT WHEN KAKASHI'S SO CONFUSED OVER IRUKA. AND IRUKA'S SO MUCH MORE MATURED THAN KAKASHI. HAHAHA....EVEN GENIUSES ARE NORMAL PPL WHEN IN LOVE .....SO CUTE ^^ I WANT MORE!!!

i THINK YOU ARE RIGHT, AND i THINK IT'S REALLY G OOD YOU THINK ABOUT THESE THINGS WHEN YOU WRITE, iT MAKES THE STORY ALL THE MORE REALISTIC!