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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person yurathewicked
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think you make a valid point- 'sexual deferrment' as you call it seems extremely plausible in this scenario.

that said, i like this story and i want you to continue~ yay!
person Maelik
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your theory could work, especially if a child is forced to think about other things all the time then secondary needs, especially if their lives are in danger. You did great with the chapter and I think Naruto should let the grown up handle it from now on (though it is funny how he's helping out). Anyways, keep on the good work and can't wait for the next chapter. Later.
person Saske\'s Iris
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Positive feedback here!!!!!!!!! I like it, I think your story with Kakashi makes sence, I like how Iruka is handling it as well and not to mention it is just so cute to see kakashi as the one losing his cool and someone finally giving ikura some credit! Looking forward to an update big time!!!!!!!
person LadyGray
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. I also find your idea's in the last chapter facinating. I think that they have a some real merit. Particularly when you consider how a culture like the one in the Naruto universe isn't surrounded by sexualized messages from the media and such the way ours is. So the fact might be that you just have other things to think about than sex, violence and training in kakashi's case. very cool story and i hope you continue with it.
person Lanier
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the chapter was awesome. It is perfectly understandable especially considering his lifestyle. Great work and Great logic... cant wait for more.
person Tariray
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loooove yu!!!!
that was literarily AWESOME!!!
hahahahahaha
couldnt stop laughing..pooor Kakashi.
Go Iruka Seme!!! whooot
this had me falling off my own chair too.
person Ciar
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, update soon.
I like the way you have written Iruka, he IS a strong boy ;)
person snow887
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD kakashi is so silly and adorable. i hope iruka pounces him soon ^__^
person lanier
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh heh, that was great. I really enjoyed his reflections on his own sexuality. Great work, cant wait for more.
person Gingitsune
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I tell you that I love the speed at which you have the chapters out. I go home each day hoping that there'll be a new chapter to brighten my day *grins* So Kakashi finally has a clue. So what is he going to do with it? How about Iruka? How does he feel about Kakashi? More? *grins*