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Yay! An other chapter up! lol, but densa Kakashi are so fun to read about, and you're right about Iruka. He should really still have a trickster's personality. Anyways, later.

Hey there! I really like this story so far, considering I'm not much of a KakaIru girl (I'm much more a Sasunaru girl, although I have nothing against this pairing).One thing... -kun is a male honorific. It's used to address males younger or of a lower ranking. Iruka wouldn't be calling Sakura Sakura-kun. Perhaps it would be Sakura-san (as is Miss Sakura) or Sakura-chan (not so much this one, just because it's generally used for very young females, or for people you know *very* well, and also to show affection.). Just thought I'd drop that little tidbit on you!

another great chapter! please update soon agaiN!

Well I for one am glad that you decided to make this more than a one shot. This is a very fun and satisfying story. Keep up the great work.

So happy to see you continuing the story so dilligently! Love the portrayal of Iruka, don't often read him depicted like this. Oh....and evil....EVIL for not revealing Iruka's first male lover! Plus, can't wait to see if Kakashi ever figures out dry-mouth reaction around Iruka! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

o_o oh~ the plot! love-it....

Wow. This is such a lovely courtship. I'm really enjoying your portrayals of Iruka and Kakashi. They are both believable within the context of what we know of them already from the manga and anime, but your little twists and nuances are new and wonderful. I also have great trouble writing a real PWP, as the courtship and general lead up are just so important. They are what causes the tension that we crave. You're doind a wonderful job here, and I'm so glad you plan to update regularly. ^_^

This is great writing. I am very impressed with how this story is unfolding. I can't wait to see more. Keep up the good work.

OMG this is becoming one of my favorite fics ever XD , i love the story and the way you write XD

WooT!! i'm so glad you update so quickly ^__^
i will wait for your next chapter