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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person Manda-Kun
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROAR! I love this! Which is weird, this I don't like this couple most of the time. I LOVE the way you write it! Can't wait for an update! I think this is on my favorites list now. <3
person Hime
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fic. Can't wait to read more.
person Gingitsune
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Another chapter! I love you!!!! I really liked the part where Iruka kicked Kakashi's butt! Lol. Kakashi is really dirty to use that groin kick to Iruka *hugs Iruka* Hahhaha So now Iruka knows that Kakashi likes him....what is his feelings for Kakashi though?? More?
person Ruka
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter again! You go Iruka!
person snow887
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic, its very cute and funny. I like how you made iruka able to sense pretty much everything, but i guess i would also look at how iruka starts the day if i knew he wlked around naked in his house ^__^ please update soon
person Maelik
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Kakashi; He's misunderstood. Lol, but it was really funny. can't wait till you post up chapter 3. Iruka sure knows how to deal with kids, and adults who act like kids.
person lo
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fun story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am thankful that you did not make Iruka a blushubg fool. Nice job
person Elecia Pena
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story! It's rare I find a story that has Iruka's abilities on par with Kakashi's. Also, love the interplay between them! Pleadingly hoping you'll continue, so many good stories get left unfinished. Please say this won't be one of them.
person Serenia
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* ahh, Kakashi can be so unsubtle, for a ninja! This is an enjoyable story.
person Heather
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Good things come in small packages. The value of something lies within. If you do good deeds, Santa’ll give you something fantastic come Christmastime.

To some those little sayings might be true. For a shinobi, they’re bullshit."

You know, when I first started reading this story, I really had no idea what exactly it was about, or who the pairing would be. Needless to say, when I read the opening lines, I was intrigued. So, I kept reading, and it got even better. I love all those witty barbs and sayings you throw into the story. It's even better that you portray Iruka as this enigma that Kakashi's just dying to find out about. Personally, I would love it if Iruka challenges Kakashi to a spar (and whoops his ass). And, hey, if you don't want to throw those two in bed together yet, it's your story. Do as you wish. This story shows a fresh spin on the relationship between Kakashi and Iruka. It's nice to see Iruka be something other than an overbearing, constantly freaking out, mother hen-type person. Update when you can 'cause I'll be looking forward to more!