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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Very nice use of grammar and description. The idea of a strong Iruka and brainless-as-usual Kakashi is a fabulous one. I'll be looking forward to reading more as this pairing thrills me incredibly. -grins and goes to read it again-
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter it was fun to read...
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i love how you're developing this, and yes- your grammar is very good. :) it is a pleasure to read this story~
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start. I love your portrayal of Iruka and Kakashi (and I also loved the pissed off Sasuke :P )
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story! It's funny, yet promising of more! ^^
please update soon!
please update soon!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the set up for this story. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice Kakashi is my favorite, I like the one's where they have to grow on each other, not just fall into bed. Ready for more.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I often enjoy reading Iruke as the uke. However, this doesn't mean that I like a weak Iruke. In fact, the best stories for me are Stong!Iruka who can kick Kakashi's ass! *grins* So are you intending to pair them up? I do hope so. This story is intriguing. Hope to be able to read more soon. Ja ne!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS GREAT!!!! I love the way you have portrayed both Iruka and Kakashi! I laugh every time! And for someone being plagued by evil exams in graduate school, laughter is what keeps me sane! Thank you for saving my sanity! *^_^*
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm enjoying this. Plenty of cute phrases and one liners, Iruka competent and not a push-over, and Kakashi more ditzy than a suicide blonde. Oh, and ninjas acting like ninjas, and academy student mayhem. Yay!
I'm always a sucker for first-time stories, particularly ones where the twosome in question don't lust after each other at first sight, much less shag each other into the ground. Not that that isn't fun to read... *grin* Looking forward to more...
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I'm always a sucker for first-time stories, particularly ones where the twosome in question don't lust after each other at first sight, much less shag each other into the ground. Not that that isn't fun to read... *grin* Looking forward to more...
-d.