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Ohhohohoho . I just love the ending, very comical. "this means war" whoohehe.

*applauds* Well done! =^_^=

well i guess we now know what was up between those three, hee, hee. thanks again for sharing your story with all of us. hope to see another story by you soon!

Yes. I am very...intrigued about this...war. *slow evil grin*
~Nuri-chan

It never ceases to amaze me how one can react to a single situation in more than one way. For example, a simultaineous "wow, what a great ending!" and "aawww, is it over already?" when one reaches the end of a wonderful story. Or the "oh, I hope this really is the ending and I haven't just made a fool out of myself" reaction coupled with "well, at least the author will know that this is a suitable ending if he/she looses the modivation to continue for some reason" one. And then there's the moment where one thinks both "that's odd... I could have sworn that I had reviewed this story before" and "stupid computer with it's stupid problems and stupid stupidness" simultaneously, often occompanied with "now where did my outstanding, verbose vocabulary go?...oh, there it is" as well. I could continue, but I think you get the point...

But all mention of interesting phenomenons aside, I believe it is now my duty (as a reader, fellow author, and periodical beta) to let you know just how much I enjoyed your story. It was, in all honesty, one of the best Kakashi/Iruka fics I've ever read... and as that is one of my favorite pairings, I have read my fair share of fan fics centerd around those two (more-than-slightly neurotic) ninjas. I especially appreciated your creatively appropriate characterizations of the two, as I have only ever seen Kakashi (and Iruka, but Kakashi in particular) portrayed that way once before. Yet I agree wholeheartedly with that representation of him, because, in all honesty, there is a reason behind his nerosis, and it annoys me to no end when people choose to write about him (or, worse, from his perspective) in a decidedly ignorant fashion. But I digress...

In conclusion, I was very impressed with your characterizations (as I just mentioned), your descriptions, and your writing style in general. This story was very well done -- creative, engaging, humorous, realistic, etc. -- and I greatly appreciate your originality and hard work. So thank you once again for such a wonderful story, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

~An Admiring Fan (with a stupid computer) ^^

That was soooo awesome. I am so filled with warmth and happiness right now I am almost giddy. I was totally flabergasted (sp?) at who was behind the scrolls. I never would have guessed in a million years even if I had the nin dogs help. I love the relationship between the three of them as well as the contents of the scroll. It was so caring. I dont know what it is about your writing style but you just draw me into the story and it wraps around my heart. Another great chapter. Hope the chem test went well. Cant wait for the next chapter, and definitly if you write other stories please let me know.

Haha! I didn't see that coming. XD Is that the last chapter? The whole thing so far has been great. And as to what has happened to Gai? Has he finally found a lover of his own? *Shudders*

thank god if the sause poisoned ya I woulda died from story withdrawl...;) sounds like you have had a good time creating this story and that makes the story more fun for us. Reading your commentary is part of what makes your fic so endearing to us peon fans. Anyway loving it absolutly loving it and that threesome crops up all the time and it still makes me smile, nice going i was assuming it was only one of them but all three are closet pervs no?

hee,hee,heee.....to good! so all three of his former students were in on it huh? loved it! so what is up with those three? hmmm? well if this is the end of your story let me just say it was very entertaining and you did a wonderful job writing it. hope you continue to write. if this is not then end just yet then the pervious still holds and i'll hang on to see how you wind this baby up otherwise. thanks again for taking the time out of your busy life to share your story with all of us.

uwah....Cool! But we're near then end? Dang. Oh well! It's still a great story! *Goes to re-read the lemon*