rate_review Reviews

holy SHIT, this fic is fucking awesome. ^.^ it's absolutely PERFECT. the characters were so wonderfully written, with good, sound reasons for all of their actions. their reactions to each other were so beautiful (especially when Iruka began to obsess over Kakashi's lips ^^), that I just couldn't WAIT until the penetration scene, just to see how they'd actually react to it. the lemon was beautifully written, don't worry about THAT. ^^ (although, from your comments, I'm assuming your regular readers have already told you that ^-^;) hm... I'm trying to think of other things I wanted to say. ^^;

oh yeah

personally, I TOTALLY agree that cranberry sauce is meant to be eaten canned. ^^ or OUT of the can, but NOT homemade like my parents like. x.x blech.

and also. THANK YOU for not REALLY throwing Gai into the mix. that was just...a little too weird. ^^;

*Eyes go big* *Tosses lemon shaped confetti* *cheers*

Well and tastefully done

Wow! Oh Wow! This was so cool! I LOVED IT! So it's taken me an hour and half to read the WHOLE STORY; I just couldn't stop! Hmmm, I knew, I KNEW that it was either Naruto or Sakura writing those scrolls. You're a cheeky one making ALL THREE OF THEM INVOLVED! Sorry, I'm gushing, this was so good! Congrats on a wonderful piece, please keep up the amazing work!

Can I just say....WOW! This is completely awesome, my dear.

I thought Gai was sending the scrolls, but this twist is welcome and original! Yay!!

you did it, you did it! well written very tatstefully done. very high on feelings and detail of iruka's thoughts. would love to see it from kakashi's pov. good work!

YAY!!! Whew *breath* What a wonderful lemon! I'm very impressed! I love the way Kakashi pouts. I can't get over it! It's so sexy, and I swear... I would melt if he pouted to me!

O.O Not only is your overall work on this story fabulous, but that was just plain...HOT! droool. And I like Iruka's little struggle to decide if he wanted to hurt or thankd this helpfull stranger. ^_^

I can't believe that Kakashi went all the way with Iruka out to satisfy his curiosity about what he read in the scroll! I want to smack him and yet kiss him for finally getting some where with Iruka. Lol. Love your lemon. I think your writing is great! The part about pain yet pleasure was good. Frankly, rarely can anal sex be without pain (me thinks). Not the end pls? I love this story!!! I still the mysterious scroll sender is Naruto :P

That was wonderfully done. very tasteful and yet erotic. The only thing I have to comment on though is that I am left wondering what Kakashi thought as he was "showing" Iruka. I am hoping and guessing that you will put some comments from him in another chapter. Other than that your first lemon was awesome. I went back and found where the typos I mentioned were in the last two chapters. The first is in chapter 31 when Sakura confronts Iruka in the office. It is at the end of the sentence where she askes Iruka what he has done to Kakashi and then makes a visible effort to control his chakra. I am guessing that was supposed to be her chakra unless I totally read it wrong. (which wouldnt be the first time) The second is in chapter 32 when Kakashi is fighting Gai. It is the sentence just before he makes the statement that he doesnt want him anymore. Gai's name has an r stuck on the end of it. Sorry for being so nit-picky. They just stand out so much since the rest of your chapters are so awesome. Cant wait for the next one.

Oh mai gosh, finally!! Loved this story from the beginning, and the lemon just made it all better ;)
More sex to the people! Or atleast to Iruka ^^;