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squeals of delight!!!!!!!! that was great! and I am so glad that you aren't gonna leave it there but continue to close up all the loose ends. I liked the pouting contest in the kitchen it was cute and of course the sex scene was also well done! and if they really thank the scroll individual in person then that auta be one interesting conversation...

If this was your first attempt at writing a lemon, then damn your good. You got a real nack for it. so don't wast your talant and write more.

That was a great lemon! You have such a special way of writing, it's really nice, and I hope you'll keep on doing it even when this story is finished

For a first lemon I think you did very well.
Yes was tastefully done. Kudos!
Good luck on your finals.
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!
That was so great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just read all of the 33 chapters for the first time in one day.
I couldn't stop at all.
This is so great!
Please continue and make the story go on and on...

WHOOO.. *fans self* That was not bad, hehee ^^;; If I were Iruka I would find it weird when Kakashi told me about the scrolls telling him.. but then again, what IS considered weird in Konoha?

Oh my that was fun to read. So will we learn who sent those scrolls to Kakashi or not?

ohhhh yeah thank you thank you thankyou!!!

that was awsome! but god who is it that keeps giving those scrolls to kakashi?

well please continue!

Bravo. Very well done. And the suspense was awesome. I look forward to the morning after, a truly bonding experience.
And I am absolutely dying trying to figure out who is the mysterious scroll dropper. Hurry up and tell, I'm going bald from pulling out my hair.

Wow! So very hot, but with incredibly good emotional content without excessive sappiness. If I didn't know better, I'd swear that wasn't your first lemon scene! Didn't expect Kakashi to just go for it given his hesitancy with everything else (neither did Iruka, I bet! He!). I was guessing Iruka would try to control things when they finally got to the act of penetration, to prevent anyone from getting hurt due to Kakashi's lack of experience. Guess that scroll was really informative! Also tells your how much Kakashi's developed. Can't wait to see what kind of lemons you write when you've got more practice under your wing! Whew! Gimme me more!