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good god put the sause down its past good. awww squeezes kakashi plushie he is sooo cute! heh right ot the point so glad the glich is fixed and we get more of your wonderful chappies it was most distressing when i wasn't getting my fix taken care of. I am just all sorts of curious to know what this scroll contains. I mean the line we gotta talk can;t be too bad cuz they are all like wahoo in love er at least lust so...what is it?!?!? giggles and squirms in my chair i sooo cna't wait for tomorrows update!

Oi, Little Shadow!

Great chapter. You know, I lost my virginity when I was 16, and I have to tell you, I HATED public affection. HATED it. Brian would try to touch me, and I was like, EW get off! Eventually, I got used to it, and I settled down, but sex has to do something to your body to make you notice all the other stuff! No joke!

Are you taking finals right now? I AM! It sucks. *pout*

Ok as a new anthropology student I may just be excited about applying culture but it is just amazing how much everbody talks about touch and it's assumtions. It makes me think "god is all the world ever going to boil down to is talk about sex?!??!". I had the similar experience with little touch outside of family so my assumtion was that touch implied intimacy. I got over most of that but still people that linger in hugs make me raise an eyebrow;)

good luck on finals and did i mention that how happy those two are after gettin laid is absolutly histerical. giggled the whole way through sweet iruka's leud thoughts. the difference between what is and what i expect from the characters makes me laugh. MAN I LOVE your portrail of iruka and kakashi!

Wow, you've really put a lot of thought into this. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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I remember very clearly that there were 30 chapters. did you delete them or was it aff?

This is not only brilliant writing, but brilliant plot and... wow. Yeah. yay for Clueless!Kakahsi and uber-nin!Iruka ^_^

I also appreciate your sense of humor and the reality of the story. Not only are they in character (with awesome medic details) but they're also not "fansinduced-sooper-powerz" ninja with the crazy skills that people foist off onto the characters in most fanfiction. Additionally, I absolutely love the little ornamental details about the village. It doesn't detract and it makes the story have some spice. And DAMN. The kissing scenes are SO hot. Personally I'm a fan of the kissing. And the questions are so real. Wow.

Okay, I've been sufficiently distracted from doing work for an hour. Damn. It was like eating candy... couldn't stop after one chapter.

Weird. When AFF screw up, they really screw up.

I've been following this story for a while now, I read CHapter 31 I think this morning and now it isn't here. When I went to update my story, As Long As It Feels OK, the latest chapter was missing so it isn't just you. Keep up the good work, this story is hillarious.
~Hawk

And there are stories missing too:( Yesterday was such a good day too, a bunch of my favorite stories had been updated, one that hadn't been in a really long time and now its gone:'( Not fair