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for I Don't Think You Understand

by WaterShadow

person Komikitty
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Yet another example of Perfect timing!
heh heh heh. Poor Gai.
Though I didn't need the image of him pulling off his spandex to get into the shower. Ohe well
It still rocks though and YES Diplomatic Relations is a great story!
Along with the one that goes after it...Leadership...something, can't remember the name.
Great Work!
=^_^=
person littleolmee
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay that was just too funny! (littleolmee laughs as she bangs fist on desk) you do a wonderful job on staying within character, your protrayal of gai was just so well done. i had wondered for awhile if gai might have been sending those scrolls but, after this chapter it seems to eliminate him as well. loved how kakashi and iruka just couldn't help themselves! oh man and gai walking in on it! keep up the good work!
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi, Little Shadow!

Another great chapter. *breathes* What are we going to do with these two? Someone's either got to throw them in bed together or relieve some of their frustration. I'm telling you...I'd be insane by now if I were them! Oh torturous rapsody!

Thank you so much for your reviews on my stories. You have no idea how much it means to me!

Be well!
person Lanier
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh heh that was great, Poor Iruka and Kakashi having the same dreams. Poor unsuspecting Gai, if only he knew what trauma he was putting his friends through. Kakashi and Iruka must be running up the water bill with all those showers and laundry. *smirks* It makes me wonder if anyone else is noticing any odd behavior from them? Cant wait for the next chapter.
person Komikitty
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snerk* I..I have no words...I really don't.
Poor, Poor Iruka and Kakashi....
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, Little Shadow.

*already in giggling fits* If you don't do something with Iruka, Kakashi, and poor Gai soon, I think I'll have to pass out and go belly up! You know, reading this, it's so funny to watch the two men lust over Gai just because they are lusting over each other. Great idea for them to take their sexual frustration out on each other, by the way. I'm not one to press for lemons, but my God, I feel so sorry for them!

person Whispers in the Wind
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Snerks* *Falls sideways out of her computer chair* Heheheheheheheheheee! Poor Iruka! Poor Kakashi! But don't you dare stop writing this. Muhahahahahahahahaaaa! I look foreward to the next update.

*bows* *leaves offering of Jolt cola and chocolate*
person Jiro
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It's very well developed. Keep up the amazing work!

~Jiro

P.S. This might sound a little random, but those A/N you put at the bottom of each chapter sorta remind me of "Jerry Says" (?) from the Jerry Springer show. You know, in which he draws a 'moral' from the segment topic. LoL. I have NO idea what that comes to mind whenever I read your author's notes, but it does.
person Lanier
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, that was a great chapter. It was so funny to see Iruka having Kakashi's thoughts and freaking out because of them. Your fight scene was awesome. I wish I could write scenes like that.. but even if I can see them in my head I can't manage to get them down on paper. I can't wait to see the next chapter.. and please let me know if you are going to write another story so I can keep a look out for it.
person Tsyk
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear god! How d you do it! I usually get bored with most fics that take so long......but....but I'm not! I'm actually finding myself fidgeting in my chair mentally whinning something to the likes of "but I want more damnit! Curse you computer for showing me this before it was done!!!"
Ok, whinning aside, I really love the flow of the story and am more that content to stare hopingly st the screen for a conclusion(even thought that means no more T_T). I'd have to say my favorite aspect is the comcial phrasing and ramdom inner monologues. Also I'd have to say you've made one of my all time favorite interpretations of Iruka.....EVER!
.......and the author rants make me giggle.....^____^ you make me happy! Have a pixi stick!