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for Forgetting Sasuke

by CutieSakura

person padoopadoop
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very cute and well written. Very few grammatical errors and very smooth. I hope you continue this story (I find myself checking every day for an update!). Keep up the good work!
person Reya
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOO! Very nice!!!!! Update soon!
person Katzztar
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, now here's a story that makes pairing Sakura with Neji believable.
A flustered Sakura and a seductive Neji .... wonderful.
person Nevada-tan
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin' it.

*scarfs McDonalds burger*

But, for serious. Minimal grammar errors, overall nice flow, good character development. A bit too much blushing, but there's not much you can do about that. After all, it's blushing. xD ANYWAY... Looking forward to an update. I love where this is going. Keep it up! :)
person Katzztar
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is an interesting pairing and plot.
person kitty
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wah!!udpate update update update!!!!!! come on! update! i luv neji and sakura but couldnt find much of that parin here sniff sniff!! T__T update!
person Saico
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was quite good.
person ruka
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow a wonderful story!
Who knew neji could be so sweet!

Please don't leva it at thIS!
person Ice
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, there needs to be more Neji/Sakura fics. You did a good job keep it up! b^_^d
person IlikeNejiSaku
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like NejiSaku, too. Hot guy+hot girl and both of them have angst in their mind. they are interesing couple