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by Jinyang

person Debbie-kit
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damnit! WHy won't you update?!
You've had the profile were it says: "The chapter wil come in a few days..." But it is a VERY long time ago you wrote that!
Comeon! I like the story so much...!
person ranni
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funky!!! Strange!!! but compelling! Loved it-want to see more-get cracking! :)
person Izze
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The timeline gets REALLY confusing in chapter two, to the point where I can't even tell what's really happening in the plot line, and the constant reminding of who this fic is by is extremely annoying and distracts from the story.
person Bakura
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was so good *____*

but where's the smut? ;.;
person tsuki
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Update soon please!
person chi no hana
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!!! oronaru action! i m sick i no! updates!
person shimomizu
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my~ o.O on the 1st glance i thought it was going to be an oroxnaru pwp only ficlet X3 ok my wrong after looking back at the summary
person Reyn
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O How's he know Naruto's name?!? Wait...is that KIBA????