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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..I love this story, please, PLEASE update soon
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved it keep it coming this is one of the best ive read so far
cant waut to see how it turns out with ten and tem but time will tell
so ill be waiting
cant waut to see how it turns out with ten and tem but time will tell
so ill be waiting
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Outside of the massive OOC for Kiba, Hinata, Temari and Tenten the story is good so far. You should explain Hinata’s personality change in a future chapter. Using the time skip as a device to change characters without explaining it lowers your credibility.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUDE NO FUCKN FAIR AGH!!!! but that update rocked so hard man i just cant wait BUT A BLOODY CLIFFHANGER YE BE EVAL!!! EVAALLLLL!!!!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crack fic. Retarded, but hilarious.
Awesome.
Awesome.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh this is great keep up the great work
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah an update i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE! I'm loving it, but why did it take soo long to update. AH well this chapter was worth the wait!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is great keep up the grat work
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i hope u update chapter 6 on fanfic good luck on school!!!