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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting second chapter, I'm looking foward to the third! Naruto's character makes me both happy and sad. I feel so sorry for the way he was treated before. I hope the new school is better!
Just one question, I mean no offense, but will there be a lot of NejiNaru or a little? Personally I perfer very little, being a rabid SasuNaru fan...! =D
Just one question, I mean no offense, but will there be a lot of NejiNaru or a little? Personally I perfer very little, being a rabid SasuNaru fan...! =D
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is really good , I hope you update really seen. like rigth NoW!!! no , bit I do really like your story and I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...talk about tension. i like how this story is going. i can't wait to see what happens between those three. is itachi gonna bully naruto too? maybe molest him? heh...well, keep up the good work. ganbatte!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good use of descriptives, nice story flow and nice range of vocab. the language seems strong for a kid ^.^ how ever good progress keep on at it =)
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. Keep going, and I'll keep reading. .
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. quick update!! yey! thanks for clearing up my questions! it helped a lot. neji's appearance on the first day was great. harhar...i wonder how the other students will react? well, i can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the awesome work. thanks ^^
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing, very intriguing. This is going to be a great story, I can already tell. Your writing style alone is enough to make it a good story, but I can't wait until the plot is developed a little more. I'm very curious as to why Naruto's parents were murdered and what or if the Uchiha's had to do with it.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFGWTFBBQ!!! -Smacks hand repeatedly on the computer desk from hyperness- I love it!! -Adds to favorites- ^_^ Please update soon.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm..very interesting start. i like it. but i was a bit confused about the murders. naruto's parents were with his grandma at the time of the murder? or were his parents killed some years before on another birthday, and then his grandma was murdered a few years after that? anyway, please continue! ^^
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So fucking great! I can wait to read what will happen next! I don't know what the person who gave you this plot think, but you writing skills are good It's well describe and Naruto and Sasuke are well IC. I wonder how Sasuke will finish by fucking Naru-chan...Hope you update soon! Good luck!