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for Under The Enemy's Roof

by hangingday

person Ash (not logged in)
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is abosolutely BRILLIANT! WONDERFUL! AMAZING! BEAUTIFUL! I love it!!!!!!! Please update soon! Please? I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Veterence
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great. I've never reviewed a story before (seriously), but I like this one to an extreme. All I have to say is that this is an amazing story and I hope you update. Just know, I'll probably be waiting for an update years later if I have to because that's how much I like this.
person Aoimoku
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please continue to update this fic, it's awesome. This story has great character interactions, Naruto/Gaara and Naruto/Sasuke brothers, not to mention the general group dynamics of the Sasuke brothers, Gaara, and Naruto. I have shameless fun when they argue amongst themselves.

person FlamencoPenguin
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so very happy that I found this fic. AU fics are always difficult, but for some reason, writing a good AU for Naruto seems almost impossible for most authors. Yet you capture the scene perfectly. The characters still act like themselves even within the confines of their new world. Gaara is wonderful in his somewhat Gothic, totally odd, and very intimidating presence. Sasuke is also great. I love how he competes with Itachi for Naruto's attention and how Itachi is so smug about it. Sasuke is obviously a bit confused over how he is supposed to be feeling for his supposed adopted brother, especially when not-very-brotherly goodnight kisses make their appearance :). Neji is the most curious character. He has not been formally introduced into the plotline yet, as Sasuke is keeping him away, but I can tell that I will be just as fond of him and his quicks as I am of Gaara and Sasuke.
Naruto is something else. He is so true to form that I can't help but love him in this universe. His constant hatred of Sasuke, his neverending smiles and good humor, and his impossible confidence and arrogance are all combined to create his true character. Yet unlike some series, Naruto is not two dimensional. He feels things, and he makes other people feel things as well. He is human.
And then there is the plot. I can tell that I am going to be hooked on this story and pulled along until you finish it. I like the idea that people are interested in Naruto in different ways and that he has an almost tangible appeal. I love Naruto dearly because he is just so sweet and troubled, so it is nice to see other people appreciate him as well. And his mysterious 'condition' makes me very curious. Well, I was sorta wondering how you were going to incorporate Kyuubi into the fic.
So, hopefully your ego is nice and inflated now and you can go off and write some more brilliant stuff. I'd love to see where you are going with this fic and I hope that you are planning on continuing it.
person Kai
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I really love it!
I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to the sight of Naruto
in a little leather shirt! *giggle*
LOVE YA!
Kai
person sooky
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Itachi XD can u be my sugar daddy *sprays hair blonde & puts in blue contacts* whoawhoawhoa i was expecting gaara to get a little move on Naruto when they were at the piercing parlour i.e like a butt pinch which would of been very nice. But i guess there will be exciting things in the next chapter. Naruto must be groped! XD then sasuke will come blood thirsty to kill gaara =D end. <- perfect example for the next chappy. and ur personification of the broken hyena dolls got me laughing till i fell off the cha!r, good work on it brew up original ideas ^.^ up date when you cann - from a supporter sooky
person Devil's Angel
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I've been following it on my cell phone and this is the first time i've been able to review
person (:
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
narugaa is niceeeeeee~
person Manda-Kun
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh lords! I love it! I can't WAIT till the next chapter, I swear. I love how you make everyone's charater, they seem oc but in a good way, so that they fit into their AU lives, yet at the same time, stay prefectly in character. Don't know how to explain it. Roar, Gaara with a lip ring that's hot. Oh oh, can't wait for it to be steamy. xD I know you said this is gonna be SasukexNaruto like, byt he end, but just throw Neji&GarraxNaurot lovin' in there too. xD You know we fans would love it. I adore your storyline so far too, I just can't WAIT to see what the eff is the matter with Naruto and Gaara. Aniiiimaly! <3 -Gives ya Mmm Mmm good cookies and smexeh Naruto bishie Plushies-
person Gaki
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! you study psychology?!?!!?!?! I was seriously thinking of being a psychologist, but then I realised I can't make much money in Australia by doing that, being asian as another important factor...Not many europeans in Australia would go to young, asian psychologists....

ANYWHO, damn, you left us hanging just before the changing room scene. T.T

I really enjoyed this!!! But...Gaara seems a little OOC....i just can't imagine him buying and listening to CD's...or being gothic, for that matter. I mean, he IS all dark and brooding but I don't
think he would be one of those 'slash my wrists,' dark, lacey, leathery clothes shoppers. Well, that's what I think anyway. And Neji's eyes are lilac? I thought they were milky white...

The fic is very interesting! I hope there will be more fics like this one, cause more than half on these sort of sites are stuff that you wouldn't even bother to click on. Update soon!!!! ^___^!!!

-Gaki

p.s. are you gonna make Gaara and Neji evil for their 'research' and 'profit' purposes? That's so sad! I am a HUGE Naruto/Neji shipper, as well as GaaNaru, I hope there will be romance for them!!
p.p.s. please read my stories that I've posted on aff.net! Under the penname 'Gaki' , they're called 'Neji's Problem' and 'Drugged.' Only the first chapters are up, though...

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