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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was weird........I can't wait to see what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to know what's like shopping with Gaara and Naruto so don't be like evil people and mention something and then not write what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAARA!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.... I like the idea of Gaara and Naruto getting primal.... sounds very interesting since I'm a huge GaaNaru fan... I really hope they become a finalized pairing
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHHHHH!!! NEJI'S A DOUCHE BAG!!!! *cries* Eh...Wait! Does this mean he can end up with Gaara?! YAAAAY!!!!!!!!! If he doesn't...*sighs* =( XD Nah, Sasu's okay but I'm tired of him ALWAYS winning when I read NaruSasu VS. GaaSasu. *twitch* Anyway, I loved the chapter! <3
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And thus the plot thickens! UPDATE SOON!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow interesting chapter
This is getting all too good what are they plainning on doing to Naruto....is he gonna end up with Sasuke i hope not....
i don't know what to say about this chapter other than is was great!
i can't wait for the next one
This is getting all too good what are they plainning on doing to Naruto....is he gonna end up with Sasuke i hope not....
i don't know what to say about this chapter other than is was great!
i can't wait for the next one
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I adore rivarly... especially since the prize has no clue that he is the said prize. Haha. The whole thing is nicely done but i suggest rounding your characters more. It isnt really clear how Sasuke, Gaara or Neji (especially Neji) suddenly came to like Naruto. The fight thing with Gaara was a bit shady too, but overall, i adore how you make three hot and powerful guys go for poor, clueless little Naruto. Oh yeah, Itachi's great too. So far, he's the character thats quite steady. Mind you, this is all my opinion, but there you go... :)
Keep going, this is really promising. I'll be sure to keep a lookout so be sure to update! ^_^
Cheers.
Keep going, this is really promising. I'll be sure to keep a lookout so be sure to update! ^_^
Cheers.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, GOD! I was soo freakin' happy when I saw a NEW chapter. I remember I kept refreshing the damn page to see if you updated or I misread something, lol. So glad I checked on this story again. Mmm~ very nice chapter is was, Chapter 8. Though I am wondering....is Neji having love feelings for Naruto or is he just "using him"??? The last bit of part threw me off a bit. DO please update more! I <3 this so freakin' much!!! T3T Oh, yeah, on the last lil fragment there, did Gaara say that or Neji?? Anyway, I am glad that you put in "there are nine of you" in the story...made it more like the anime a bit. Before reading this chapter I just found out about the nine demons. Glad I re-watched some of the episodes. Now I am really starting to get into NaruGaara a bit. Ok, I need to stop rambling. So, basically, do continue and have some butt-smutt soon, lol.
~"A.H."
~"A.H."
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading all the seven chapters you posted, and Oh. God. I LOVE IT!!! I don't know why you have soo little reviews. :( Such a great plot, setting, and so. I seriously can't imagine what you plan to think up next. I do hope you will have a good long break, motivations, and inspirations to get you going. I am really starting to love NaruNeji, NaruGaara, NaruIta, and NaruSasu. Mmm~ the suspense of a love-pentagonal-crossing. I really can't wait when each of their relationship bloom. Do you plan on making Naruto's relationship with Itachi...'open'? I think I'm starting to like this coupling. :D Even though I know I'm thinking ahead, I'm wondering what is the relationship or what will happen later with Itachi and his family. :0 Very suspenseful. I have to say that needle-struggling scene was hot. XD Ok, enough of my yaoi-lover nonsense. Do continue your amazing work! :D
~A.H.
~A.H.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?!?! I really want to know what's going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And could there please be more Gaara and Neji?!?! I know you're a SasuNaru fan, but I like Gaara and Neji's pretty cool to and they seem to be acting odd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like crazy love square's!!!!!!!!!! Almost as much as I like foursomes (Only yaoi of corce and only in fan fic's and some Doujinshi......*blush*)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So.......UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And does Gaara even like Naruto in that way??? And is the Uchicha family evil or just Itachi??? Because I know someone's evil in that family and I know it's not Sasuke or Naruto!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*gives you a thousand hugs*
-The Uppdate Monster
-The Uppdate Monster
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story i just read all the chapter today and i really enjoy them all.
geez Sasuke really doesn't deserve Naruto at all, i really wanted Itachi to win what he was saying to Naruto...i prefere ita/naru over sasu/naru anyday :P
your lucky that you can take your psychology exam, mines was today but there a transit strike here in New York and i live in the bronx and my college is in Queens...a hour 2 hours away :((((
i think i failed that subject...how troublesome >_<
please update soon!
geez Sasuke really doesn't deserve Naruto at all, i really wanted Itachi to win what he was saying to Naruto...i prefere ita/naru over sasu/naru anyday :P
your lucky that you can take your psychology exam, mines was today but there a transit strike here in New York and i live in the bronx and my college is in Queens...a hour 2 hours away :((((
i think i failed that subject...how troublesome >_<
please update soon!