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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it has been a while since you wrote on this story, are you going to continue?
please do so, I find it unike, and the way the tree most powerful guys in
school are after Naruto is just splendid.
if you have written more but not posted it on the nett, can you
please send me a mail, I would really appreciate it...
update, update, you know you can do it.
I will give you a cookie (^_^)/
please do so, I find it unike, and the way the tree most powerful guys in
school are after Naruto is just splendid.
if you have written more but not posted it on the nett, can you
please send me a mail, I would really appreciate it...
update, update, you know you can do it.
I will give you a cookie (^_^)/
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. a lot of people have tried te whole Naruto in modern high and its usually really boring and sometimes just awful but this is really good.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You update fast. (is very pleased with this) This story jest keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what happens next! Hey, how come Naruto's the only one getting a ride? What about Sasuke?
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! At least Itachi! All this secret are bad. Hope they won't ripe Sasuke and Naruto apart. I think it's funny how the 3 rich boys are here to protect Naruto and how, with his easy going way of life, he's going to brighten them. He wants to be friend with them, che, as if, they just want to get in his pants. They can fight as much as they want, if it's Sasuke who win him (and what's in his pants) it's ok with me. I love how you make them all. Naruto's good heart, Sasuke's cold and possessive nature, Gaara's lonely and scary, Neji's calm but cold, and Itachi's just scary in his bastard way. And I think I'm so gonna hate Sakura. Good luck!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL!COOL!COOL! MORE!MORE!MORE!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No one threaten Gaara, bot even weasel guy! Aw, Naru's already been claimed by my favorite guys.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! :) Itachi arrives!!! *victory dance* whee, whee, whee!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirlish squeals* Hehehe, I can FEEL it! :) Itachi-kun really has something to do with their condition!!! :P Hmm hmm *thinks* So is it really about some Akatsuki organization that researches on some genetic disorders or something??? :D Hahaha, I get new ideas after every time I read a chapter that you post ^___^ And man, you post fast!!! :P Keep up the good work ^__^
And now, Naruto's comparing Sasuke to an overpossessive lover XD XD XD *fangirlish mind's wheels are turning*
>> Seto's Darkness
And now, Naruto's comparing Sasuke to an overpossessive lover XD XD XD *fangirlish mind's wheels are turning*
>> Seto's Darkness
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to know what Naruto's condition is, and what other secrets the Uchiha household is keeping from Naruto. So far off to a good start. I'll be watching this story to see how it turns out.
Sasuke is acting like a jealous lover, isn't he?
Sasuke is acting like a jealous lover, isn't he?
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Itachi finally shows up...YAY! Now...I wonder what is Neji's reason (as the excuse he'll tell Naruto rather the REAL reason) for signing that note?
UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW
UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waa! Finally Itachi has come out!! ^^ By the way, Itachi-san is actually more formal than Itachi onii-chan. In fact, -chan is a sort of endearment. Just thought I should point that out ^^ Otherwise, the story is so GOOD ^^ I can see the plot developing so clearly and it's wonderful that you're updating regularly! Keep up the great work!