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January 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I think you're amazing. Your writing is humour filled& oddly enticing. Other than the constant 'Kyoobi-boy' reference which I found mildly irritating after over a billion repetions...don't get me wrong .. ihad so much fun reading your writing that I questioned my own dreamto ever do so you even bought a few tears. If you've ever written further on the story please do make some more of humourless-life sparkly by mailing it to saramarjan786@gmail.com. Khurda-fis!
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February 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I know this story is probably long dead but I just want to say how much I've enjoyed it! Really I've been re-reading it for years now and every time it makes me laugh, cry and cheer. I saw your rant on the last chapter and I hope dearly you continued with your writing, your writing style is fabulous. Even if its not this fic; writing is an art and its completely understandable to lose your muse. Especially with rude people harassing you. I just hope those obnoxious trolls didn't leave you with a bad taste for writing, I think you have a talent for it. Annnnnd i'm sorry for the weird, pushy advice from a complete stranger #^_^# anyway love the fic!
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October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Easily one of the most overrated NaruSasu fics in fandom history. Nothing happens in the story, unless you count giving each other manis/pedis. The chapters creak past at a snail's pace, the characters are ridiculously OOC, and the entire premise is mind-bogglingly dumb. Sasuke's solution to having his life threatened by Itachi? Why, to become a teen mom, of course! I mean, who wouldn't want to incapacitate himself with pregnancy while a deadly killer is out for his blood and everyone else who shares his blood? Kind of defeats the purpose of having kids if Itachi skewers them like he did the rest of the clan. I know the author isn't reading this, but I still need to say this: this fic is awful.
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January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah I remember reading this years ago and had to come back. Love your story. Thank you for writing as much as you did, and I hope life is treating you well!
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November 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I am in love! Couldn't take my eyes off the screen until I had more. Every chapter made me fall more and more in love with the characters and plot. Possessive horny Kyuubi has my support all the way, try waddling away this time bitch! (Though I sympathise somewhat for Sasuke with three chibi Narutos using his insides as tackle practive :) ) Can't wait to be blown by the next chappie (or I okay with giving that treat to Sasuke *wink wink*) meanwhile, off to re-read until its ingrained in my brain!
PS: Kakashi= friendly pervert....pure Genius
PS: Kakashi= friendly pervert....pure Genius
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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I got to about chapter 4 before looking to see if this is even complete... considering when it was last updated I have a feeling it will never be :/ I really enjoyed what I had read but being stuck forever at a cliff hanger... not the most enjoyable idea for myself. I will definitely bookmark it in the off chance that it does get updated. The plot of the story is amazing, it is well written, and just over all enjoyable, I really wish it was finished though. Best of luck to you in the future.
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Always loved your writing, and glad that I finally found somewhere that at least one story was still posted. You were one of the authors who first got me into reading mpreg. Would love to see it finished, but no pressure. I was wondering if there was any way I could get copies of a couple of your other stories, specifically the Stork stories set in the Kenshin verse, since your ffnet and lj pages have been purged. If this is possible, please email me. Thank you!
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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, great story.
With all the talk, it isn't known that Naruto is Minato and Kushina son? It maybe wouldn't help him with the council (that is a thing that is a pure fanon, btw, look how they chose Tsunade (elders) or while she was in coma.) BTW. the only recognition he need is form junins, canon-vise.
Anyway, wouldn't Tsunade better prepare for the event? I mean, there has to be something that could put pressure on the unwilling council members. Also, a fact that Gaara become a Kage could be an argument.
Oh, the actual reason for this review: think, how many years is it, since in the Uchiha compound someone lived. Not to mention all the battles Konoha went through. Do you really think, that that place, if even exit, would be in a condition to live in? Not to mention, the compound is the farthest one from the centrum and Tower (canon), very inconvenient.
Maybe the one story house Minato and Kushina lived would be better (and not so common used;)). I can imagine Jiraiya was using it as his Konoha residence, or a genin team would care of it as a D-rank in reverence to the Fourth...
With all the talk, it isn't known that Naruto is Minato and Kushina son? It maybe wouldn't help him with the council (that is a thing that is a pure fanon, btw, look how they chose Tsunade (elders) or while she was in coma.) BTW. the only recognition he need is form junins, canon-vise.
Anyway, wouldn't Tsunade better prepare for the event? I mean, there has to be something that could put pressure on the unwilling council members. Also, a fact that Gaara become a Kage could be an argument.
Oh, the actual reason for this review: think, how many years is it, since in the Uchiha compound someone lived. Not to mention all the battles Konoha went through. Do you really think, that that place, if even exit, would be in a condition to live in? Not to mention, the compound is the farthest one from the centrum and Tower (canon), very inconvenient.
Maybe the one story house Minato and Kushina lived would be better (and not so common used;)). I can imagine Jiraiya was using it as his Konoha residence, or a genin team would care of it as a D-rank in reverence to the Fourth...
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have a history with this story, actually. I wont bother you with it though. All I will say is: This is wonderful. Keep on updating whenever you can. I honestly enjoy reading this, it's my own little escape from life.
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February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16: Huh? Is this a nightmare? ____ Oh. Still, stress relief or not, that’s really disturbing. ____ XD The note is funny. XD ____ Uh yeeaahh, I’d sleep in the living room tonight if I were you, Naruto. ^^;; ____ Knowing Naruto, he’s probably going to make an attempt anyway.
“Then-slightly rounded belly?” Sounded really round then! ____ Haha, I knew he’d make an attempt! XD ____ Makes sense that the aim would be a lot better. ____ Well, that’s half of it done. (Hopefully.) Now Sasuke has to do the other half…. Well, then again, his part is deciding how much Naruto needs to work for the apology to be accepted. So, no, Naruto’s still gonna be busy. ^^ Heh—I love it when Sasuke just points and says, “Out.” XD ____ Cool line: “His father had bruised his soul, his brother had broken it …” ____ “Sit. We’re going to talk. Civilly. Without any doujutsu, chakra, or pointy objects. Got it?” In WHAT universe! XDDD ____ “Especially people who that decision will affect.” I’m not sure, but I think that sentence needs to be revised a little. Sounds a little awkward to me. ____ I like the description of Sasuke at night. That’ll be inspiration for supernatural fics there. =) ____ “I can waive my masculinity enough to admit defeat.” Cool way of putting it. =D
Is it real danger, or silly danger? ____ Huh? What’s that last part?
Lol, “that only gave the babies somewhere to aim.” XD ____ I’m all for the sleeping nude idea! ____ Was Naruto up all night fighting something? Or was that an imposter in Sasuke’s bed? ____ It’s been a while since I’ve heard about the kitten. =) ____ “The yogurt’s mine.” LOL, I can just hear his flat drawl of that line! XD ____ Hmm … so it was him…. Or IS it?? ____ First mention of Kimimaro. Is Orochimaru or Kabuto around? ____ “Justsu-sex.” Good term. I’m surprised I haven’t heard it before. =D ____ Yeah, it’s Naruto alright. I’m still wondering what that deal from the night before was.
I wonder if he’s ever hit Iruka with a pebble as the man opened the window to yell at him. >3 ____ XDDD ____ I don’t think I’ve ever seen a picture of Iruka asleep or half-asleep. I’m getting a cute mental image of him. =) ____ XD The first lines they exchange are really funny. X3 ____ Indeed, Naruto had to take care of some errands. First on the list: bug the shit out of Iruka. XD ____ Lol, that woke him up. XD ____ I thought Naruto was going to start telling Sasuke about this kind of stuff. Sasuke’s gonne be pissed when he finds out. ____ I wonder how long these assassination attempts will last. Months? Or years? ____ Naruto may have a point about the elders, but I hope he doesn’t get carried away. ____ Interesting take on the Fourth Hokage. ____ I love Kakashi’s way of putting things so bluntly and honestly. ____ “Concentration jutsu,” yeah right. (*snort*) ____ Eh, no, lose the tie. ____ “Past conversations with Sasuke had gone in the same way as beating his head against a wall for a long time---it didn’t really get him anywhere, nor did it accomplish anything, but after a while the pain made him think he must be doing something.” ROFLMFAO like there’s no tomorrow!!! XDDDDD ♥♥♥ ____ Lol, “the loudmouthed idiot and the closemouthed genius.” XDD ____ “Kakashi believed he had a real talent for utterly horrifying people …” I keep wondering where people get that idea from…. No, seriously. I don’t understand it. Surely reading Icha Icha Paradise and executing 1,000 Years of Pain weren’t the only things. Honestly, I don’t know where people got the idea that Kakashi does stuff to freak people out. Or whatever it is.
Nice opening line for this scene. I’m guessing Naruto’s not having success with the tie. ____ I’m sure Naruto would wear formal robes if he thought they looked cool. ____ Heh—“You’ll need my help.” ^^ ____ Is Sasuke worried about the time when Itachi snuck in to say hello? ____ I like the paragraph going into Sasuke’s word usage when he referred to Itachi. ____ That usage of the Sharingan I think is more suited for Byakugan usage. I’m not sure the Sharingan can see through things quite like that. ____ I like the going-through-the-track-record part. =) ____ I like how Sasuke’s getting more tense as this goes on. ____ “Kyuubi says he wants to have a go at Itachi … and I really hope he realizes that that would be my body he’s using, and---ugh---goddammit, Kyuubi; I don’t need to see that…” “Not going to ask.” XDD I WANNA KNOW WHAT THAT WAS ABOUT! XDD ____ This is pretty funny, this conversation that we’re hearing one-sided. XD ____ Move back to the old Uchiha estate? Sounds cool to me, but Sasuke’s not going to get creeped out by the memories, is he?
Heh—I was expecting a girl to have called him. ^^; ____ Oh God, WHO LET JIRAIYA IN? He’s annoying Sasuke-kun! (Jeez, listen to me, I’ve become one of them!) ____ Lol at the track record bit. XD ____ “Shit, did you just bite me?” XD That was unexpected! I didn’t think he’d actually do it!
Yay, another omake! ____ (*whistles appreciatively*) Ya look hot, Naruto! ♥_♥
Just read the rant at the end and checked your LJ. I’m sorry the fic won’t ever be updated, but at least I know there’s some closure to it. :')
“Then-slightly rounded belly?” Sounded really round then! ____ Haha, I knew he’d make an attempt! XD ____ Makes sense that the aim would be a lot better. ____ Well, that’s half of it done. (Hopefully.) Now Sasuke has to do the other half…. Well, then again, his part is deciding how much Naruto needs to work for the apology to be accepted. So, no, Naruto’s still gonna be busy. ^^ Heh—I love it when Sasuke just points and says, “Out.” XD ____ Cool line: “His father had bruised his soul, his brother had broken it …” ____ “Sit. We’re going to talk. Civilly. Without any doujutsu, chakra, or pointy objects. Got it?” In WHAT universe! XDDD ____ “Especially people who that decision will affect.” I’m not sure, but I think that sentence needs to be revised a little. Sounds a little awkward to me. ____ I like the description of Sasuke at night. That’ll be inspiration for supernatural fics there. =) ____ “I can waive my masculinity enough to admit defeat.” Cool way of putting it. =D
Is it real danger, or silly danger? ____ Huh? What’s that last part?
Lol, “that only gave the babies somewhere to aim.” XD ____ I’m all for the sleeping nude idea! ____ Was Naruto up all night fighting something? Or was that an imposter in Sasuke’s bed? ____ It’s been a while since I’ve heard about the kitten. =) ____ “The yogurt’s mine.” LOL, I can just hear his flat drawl of that line! XD ____ Hmm … so it was him…. Or IS it?? ____ First mention of Kimimaro. Is Orochimaru or Kabuto around? ____ “Justsu-sex.” Good term. I’m surprised I haven’t heard it before. =D ____ Yeah, it’s Naruto alright. I’m still wondering what that deal from the night before was.
I wonder if he’s ever hit Iruka with a pebble as the man opened the window to yell at him. >3 ____ XDDD ____ I don’t think I’ve ever seen a picture of Iruka asleep or half-asleep. I’m getting a cute mental image of him. =) ____ XD The first lines they exchange are really funny. X3 ____ Indeed, Naruto had to take care of some errands. First on the list: bug the shit out of Iruka. XD ____ Lol, that woke him up. XD ____ I thought Naruto was going to start telling Sasuke about this kind of stuff. Sasuke’s gonne be pissed when he finds out. ____ I wonder how long these assassination attempts will last. Months? Or years? ____ Naruto may have a point about the elders, but I hope he doesn’t get carried away. ____ Interesting take on the Fourth Hokage. ____ I love Kakashi’s way of putting things so bluntly and honestly. ____ “Concentration jutsu,” yeah right. (*snort*) ____ Eh, no, lose the tie. ____ “Past conversations with Sasuke had gone in the same way as beating his head against a wall for a long time---it didn’t really get him anywhere, nor did it accomplish anything, but after a while the pain made him think he must be doing something.” ROFLMFAO like there’s no tomorrow!!! XDDDDD ♥♥♥ ____ Lol, “the loudmouthed idiot and the closemouthed genius.” XDD ____ “Kakashi believed he had a real talent for utterly horrifying people …” I keep wondering where people get that idea from…. No, seriously. I don’t understand it. Surely reading Icha Icha Paradise and executing 1,000 Years of Pain weren’t the only things. Honestly, I don’t know where people got the idea that Kakashi does stuff to freak people out. Or whatever it is.
Nice opening line for this scene. I’m guessing Naruto’s not having success with the tie. ____ I’m sure Naruto would wear formal robes if he thought they looked cool. ____ Heh—“You’ll need my help.” ^^ ____ Is Sasuke worried about the time when Itachi snuck in to say hello? ____ I like the paragraph going into Sasuke’s word usage when he referred to Itachi. ____ That usage of the Sharingan I think is more suited for Byakugan usage. I’m not sure the Sharingan can see through things quite like that. ____ I like the going-through-the-track-record part. =) ____ I like how Sasuke’s getting more tense as this goes on. ____ “Kyuubi says he wants to have a go at Itachi … and I really hope he realizes that that would be my body he’s using, and---ugh---goddammit, Kyuubi; I don’t need to see that…” “Not going to ask.” XDD I WANNA KNOW WHAT THAT WAS ABOUT! XDD ____ This is pretty funny, this conversation that we’re hearing one-sided. XD ____ Move back to the old Uchiha estate? Sounds cool to me, but Sasuke’s not going to get creeped out by the memories, is he?
Heh—I was expecting a girl to have called him. ^^; ____ Oh God, WHO LET JIRAIYA IN? He’s annoying Sasuke-kun! (Jeez, listen to me, I’ve become one of them!) ____ Lol at the track record bit. XD ____ “Shit, did you just bite me?” XD That was unexpected! I didn’t think he’d actually do it!
Yay, another omake! ____ (*whistles appreciatively*) Ya look hot, Naruto! ♥_♥
Just read the rant at the end and checked your LJ. I’m sorry the fic won’t ever be updated, but at least I know there’s some closure to it. :')