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for Self-Reliance

by theninjakitty

person atan
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story... can't imagine sasuke getting pregnant, though... it was usually naruto who got pregnant -_-;
person MeLaiya
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I knew he wasnt that stupid!!! Anyhoo, i loved this, you have got to hurry and update. Love hun, keep up the good work.
person Kaiyo No Hime
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic on ff.net, but it's still such a good fic that I can't resist re-reading it here.

I hope you update soon, you really are a terrfic writer, and this really is a terrific fic.
person Hime
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Nice story. Update more!!!
person Lady Riana
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yatta!! I'm your first reviewer! I read your story on ff.net and it was one of the best Naruto stories I've ever read! I wish I can write like you but I kind of suck at the whole writing thing! ^_^! ANyway I was just wondering is this version going to be smuttier than the version on ff.net! I hope so, cause was kind of mad at you at some parts. (not going to ruin it for future readers). Oh I gotta go! I hope you update soon and good luck on AFF!
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.
I *loved* reading this first chapter of yours! A clever twist on a love story (or however this will go) that we all adore!
(However, I must kill you now. Ahah, hah, ah.. eh. Because you've stolen several ideas *I* was going to use DIRECTLY FROM MY BRAIN. How could you?! ::SCREAM:: )
Okay, now that I've killed you, read on. ( :
Not much more to this, because all I can express is how tickled-freakin'-PINK I am at your writing style and your embrace of humor.
If you don't keep writing and posting, I will resort to dastardly measures of badness in your general direction. Ahah, hah, ..eh.
-DeeDubya
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! i'm reading this on ff.net. it's one of the coolest, not to mention the best, sasuke mpreg stories i've ever read. how nice of you to share your wonderful story with us here on aff. i know your story will be received quite well here, too. now my only question is.... will there be smut?! if not that's ok. but if the answer is yes ....*drools* anyway, hope you get lots of reviews and i'll be looking foward to your next update whether it be here or at ff.net. ja! ^__^
person oOKeairaOo
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Oh, I love you for this. I love the whole idea of Sexy no Jutsu being used so that either Naruto or Sasuke became pregnant, but good fics using that storyline are hard to find. I absolutely adore this. I had several lines that I wanted to pick out just to tell you how much I loved them, but I'm sure that would be annoying, and, frankly, I'm supposed to be studying for a class tomorrow.

So, anyway, I absolutely loved it, it was both serious and hilarious at the same time, and I LOVED Sasuke's description of the plan. Too funny. I'll look forward to an update, and maybe next chapter I'll have time to leave a better review!