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great story so far but one thing ive noticed in all of the stories of naruto i've read is that they keep making him the 6th hokage instead the seventh. i'm justing wondering if all you fanfic writers got the numbers wrong or what. cause we all know the fourth was the one to seal the kyubbi in naruto, the fifth was the old man naruto grew up with, and the sixth is tsunade. so why is naruto called the sixth instead of the seventh huh? anyways great story. hope you update soon. ja ne.

This is the sweetest, coolest fic I've ever read! *sniffs* So you say all 15 chapters are at FF.net? Well, hell, you need to take a truck and bring the rest of those chapters on over here!!! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next!

The way you described how caring Naruto is toward Sasuke... *sigh*...man, it just made them both sexy as hell, and me saying 'awww, how sweet!' out loud. I sure hope that Itachi isn't coming for those kids! I hope they kick his ass if they do!

But please, please consider bringing the other chappies over...I'm sure there are a lot of readers out there wanting to know what's next. hope you bring some over soon!! EM ^_^

I know it's been awhile since the last update, but I hope you haven't abandoned this story ._. I'm not usually a sucker for male pregnancy fics, but I find myself searching for this fic to see if there's been a new chapter. I like your writing style. I hope to see more in the future :)

HOLY SHIT!!! OH MY GOD! THIS WAS A FUCKING SWEET ASS STORY!!!!!! I personally cannot wait for more. Sasuke acting all sweet and Naruto being such a loving father. It brings tears to my eyes. I thought the ending to where Naruto sang for his kits was so loving that I felt all happy and sappy and shit.

Cannot absolutely wait for more

Enma

(NEED TO READ MORE!!)

HIYA!!

Awesome story!! It was adorable; and the way Naruto sang to the babies was soooo cute! Anyway, your story is very lovable and interesting, and I hope to see more of your excellent writting style. Anway, keep up the great work!!

Shinda

I love your story, but I only just got a name on AF.net. I read the chappies you put on FF.net too and I think they're awesome.

~adios~

I've been keeping an eye on this story, but never actually started to read it until yesterday. I'm glad I did, this is really good. The very beginning was a little difficult to understand, with the "The Plan" thing. I thought I missed something, but then I figured it out. You have Naruto's character figured out entirely. Well at least in the same way I think of him. I'm not really far into the manga, but I never really thought he was all that "dumb." I always figured he had an intelligence he never shares with anyone and when my suspicions about him knowing who the father of the Sasuke's kids were I was laughing so hard. It was great just reading it and understanding how the story was unfolding. Ha, Naruto pretending to be drunk and fondling Sasuke, that was great. LoL!!! I loved it. I also liked their way of showing their feelings for one and other. They're both guys and definitely not in anyway experienced in sharing their feelings. I liked the note passing, that was great. Naruto: Do you like me circle yes or no. Sasuke: sends it back on fire. Well to skip ahead. It's nice to see that everyone now know's who Sasuke's babies' daddy is, lol. Though I was thinking Naruto didn't want everyone to know, not Sasuke so much, especially since Tsunade wants Naruto to take over really soon, but I may have been mistaken. Oh well, at least Naruto didn't have to hear a lie Sasuke would make up to tell everyone at the baby shower. After the baby shower I see Naruto doesn't want to "house" the kids now. That sucks, I was looking forward to Naruto possibly doing that in later chapters. *Hoping the story goes that far.* Well looking forward to the next update. Keep up the great work. Please, don't let anything happen to the babies and also Naruto while he's on the mission. That would completely suck.

Cya,
Fan1

I really like this story. Can you update I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Yet another fantastically writen Fan Fiction. This has really been good so far, I've enjoyed this thuroughly X3 I've read the rest of it on FF.net , and I can't wait for the next "instalment". You've got talent, so keep on goin' n__n

yea, I just read it on ff.net, and i LOVE the entire thing. But that isn't the end right!! It cant BE!! I NEED more of this story. It's like a fuckin can of pringles 'once you pop you just can't stop!!' Yea... so more please on both sites.


je ne

kit master

PS: incase you were wondering why i was reviewing here, it's because i like this sites layout better.

Well any who MORE PLEASE XD