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by theninjakitty

person rAiNwAtEr
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Words cannot descrice how wonderful this story really is. I am blown away be the share power of this touching story. I am a huge fan of Naruto and Sasuke, and the way you portray them is fantastic. I look forward to the next chapter with mounted suspence.

Your fan,

rAiNwAtEr
person TaiyChan
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Maybe I'll go check it out on Fanfiction today... Anyways, great job!
person Fan
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I love how your plot line is turning out- its sweet, but not... not AU sasuke sweet, you know? In line with their characters, but still kawaii. Keep up the good work!
person ARRYELLE
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this srory so far but I really want to know why you don't have any kissing scenes or other things in it. Like R means not full on sex intill like the last chappie but it still has plenty of limes and stuff and while I realize sasuke and naruto are recovering fom the summerhouse thing and they will always be naturally unstable, describing your 'make out scenes' would be nice
oooh and a tip sex is good for pregnant ppl. but kissing come on where is it this story has a wonderful plot but defiatly not Aff more like only FF its like a PG13 innuendo, voilence, and cussing. this is not a flame just a simple request for more passinate side to the love and romance bluntly please

Arry
person purpleprose
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story. cant wait for the update. keep on rockin!!! \m/
person cibiboy
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Ch i so glade they finally told there Fr i hope sasuke dosent niscarrige.
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can see you're on a roll this week :)
person tsusami
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gyah! You're killing me *turns to mush* that was great. It gave me warm fuzzies inside.
person Vox
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Iloveyouiloveyouiloveyouiloveyou! You are the best! I worship you! *runs off to dance around the house*
Update again, soon! :D
person cibiboy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story its also funny cant wait till ur next chap (plez dont kill the kits)