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for Self-Reliance

by theninjakitty

person krickets
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i actually SQUEALED when i saw that you had updated
like a real one out loud...if there had been people around that would have been
embarassing!


YAY FOR UPDATES!!
and it was of course another superb chapter!
and i am glad that you had them finally tell sasuke
it would of been kinda weird if they hadn't...understandable but odd
person Vox
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I truly, deeply do. Hope you keep up the good work, and not let us wait to long for the next chapter.
person tsusami
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* only at chapter 3, but damn. . that's a good chapter. One of the better male pregnancy fics i've read so far. =D ok. . going to continue reading now.
person tsusami
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention that I love this fic? kekeke
person yaoilover12
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* I love it when I read a fic I really like. It's always a pleasure to review them. Anyway, even though I typically dislike mpreg stories (guys getting pregnant from some mystical-ass womb sounds a little fishy), this one was very well-written. I loved the character interactions, the characterizations, and the overall plot. One suggestion: bring in some more bad guys to spice things up.
person Lucy
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello! You've probably heard it a lot, but this fic is definately amazing. I was highly disappointed to find myself at the end of the chapters, and then that you didn't have any other fics written. ^_^ This is the first one I've seen where Sasuke is the one one having the babies! I was really hesitant at first to even try it, assuming Sasuke would be all OOC, but boy was I wrong. Thank god I tried it anyway. Whooo! Heh. I even did some fanart (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25625896/). Nothing too fancy, but it was fun. Hope you don't mind.

Can't wait for an update!
~Lucy
person Queen of the Frogs
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Normally, I can't stand Mpreg, but I really like what you've done with this. I truely hope you finish this, it's very good.
person krickets
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uuuh not that it isnt funny when kyuubi
refers to sasuke as a bitch...but female foxes
are vixens not bitches.
just a point....he is a cute little vixen! Kawaii!

anyways i loved this chapter very much
didnt see to much wrong with spelling and grammer
although you did have a few points with comma misuse
but thats it

whats naruto gunna do? and why wouldnt itachi think to check the summer house?
and why would sasuke pick such an obvious place?
and if everyone knows that itachi knows how come no one takes the time to make
sure naruto and sasuke know?

"quit your whining pineapple head and O by the way itachi knows sasuke is preggers...
and im the one who told him."*insert nervous laughter*
that would seem kinda an important fact to me
sorry it was just getting to me
person naruke
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person laquincia
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how there's a possibly that Sasuke will have nine Naruto babies that was funny and I can't wait to see what Itach has to do with this like what is he going to do to Sasuke and/or the babies can't wait for you to finshe it when you do email me ok bye.