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person david_holmes
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was VERY HOT and SEXY and SENSUAL and.. and...

VERY nice!

I really enjoyed reading it as it went so smoothly. And whoa, Kakashi's fingers can *do* that?... *nosebleeds*
person Sir Magus
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
iruka and kakashi make such a great couple-but then again it seem like there are a lot of ways to make great couple with charactors in animes like kakashi and sasuke,or naruto and itachi, or one that is almost sick in its own perfect way-sasuke and itachi-isnt it funny all the combinations of couples u can make that still go very well together only using a handful of charactors? anyways im off topic i really like ur story and i wil look forward to the next chapters-assuming there will be more...?
person Nekarichan
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!That was so good! Im so totally jealous of your mad writing skill! lol -^.^- Keep up the good work!
person hotarubi
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loooved your fic!
Kakashi & Iruka pairings are my favorite, but this was the best I've ever read!!!
Keep going! xD
person s_w
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...................................... MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..............................
I <3 it! Great wriring...........
person s_w
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i <3 it! Great writing!
person eleanor
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice.
very nice.
very nice indeed. :)
YOU have talent, my friend.
:D:D
person ffpanda
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really hot and so wonderful! Excellent!!!
person yurathewicked
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so good! @_@

i love kakairu, and i love that you made them so young in this fic. they're so awkward and cute~ and really, i cant see iruka being as old as they always make him out to be in fanficdom.

great job- now all you need is a sasunaru and i'll love you forever. :)
person Lyndsay-Marie
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was...amazing, one of the best Kakashi/Iruka fics I've ever read:) I loved it... it left me breathless :P

~Lyndsay