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for To The Rhythm

by kitana

schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're my hero. I never thought I'd actually FIND what I was looking for here, but you've done it.
Well done.
Highly enjoyed. XD
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!! Please keep it going! Hot! Ohhhh yesss... hot!
person rasoba
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hot
person Xephyr
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty! This one I read a long time ago, but forgot to review! So, here it is. Orochimaru is a sick bastard. He also happens to be my favorite sick bastard, and you wrote him wondurfully. He would, without a doubt, do this. And I feel no sympathy for Jiraiya, because he's lucky he got snake-molested by Oro. Aaaaannnyway, wow, I would love to see more of this kindo of thing, if you're ever in the mood to write it. Great job on this! *happy party*
person kajamiku
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I love this! Orochimaru really would do something like this too! lol Good job!

kaja
person Rai-Chan
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was different, I lik it though, are you going to write more?
person Arryelle
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting I wished you would have stopped with the snakes after awhile and let orochimaru do something as well and made it a bit longer but it was beastiality to which is why you probably don't have any reviews but mine but you do write good just less animal action would be great

Arry
person oOKeairaOo
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The snake thing was freaky... which makes perfect sense, because we ARE talking about Orochimaru here. We ALL know that's something he'd do. Well-written and realistic. Great job.

*pets poor snaked-molested Jiraiya*