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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thnx for all the reviews people ^_^. I revised the first chapter quite a bit because it really needed to be done, I hope it's to everyone's liking O.o . Oh and a second chappie is in the works!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More more more more more please... hehe XD lol
More more more more more please... hehe XD lol
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaoi!!! Must have more YAOI!!! Interesting word choices though...Likee Likee
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. I like your style of writing. You should put more yaoi in it though
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story; although I prefer more violence and sex. Write more plz.
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...I didn't want the monkey's too be evil. I liked your content and word choice. Good grammar. Naughty characters. You should develop the story further with more naughtyness...O.o
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.O well...yeah... that was interesting ~.^ I always did like naughty!Kakashi ooh, I am your first reviewer :)
~Lyndsay
~Lyndsay