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god i love your work

Ache.This story makes one feel allsorts of denial/phsysical/emotional/intellectual/pain/pleasure/acceptance. A keeper.

After reading other reveiws I had to say this: I found it very loving,I never got a bad vibe in that Sasuke was cheating,I felt Naruto was the one turned away from,not Sakura,hell,it might be Naruto's kid!If you think that way,cheating/bad then Sakura is the"cheat" 'cause who's the Dad?It was deliciously erotic,I loved that there was no seme/uke nonsence.I knew who was who immediatly/constantly and I'm delirious half the time.Sakura is,hell they all are/get lucky here.And they all deserve it cause they are not so lucky in the manga.Poor brain washed Sasuke,always being the stoic.N/B to reveiwers who spazzed on pregnant women are ugly so pityfuck/be faithful to them.How insulting!Preg women are hot(in reality they are hotter inside too,more blood volume),lots of people are turned on by them and you can have sex until contractions start and orgasms even(especially) with contractions(gotta relax somehow,thats why the clit is on the outside !)Its advertising not males preference that makes women("fat as whales")unattractive in this state,as long as you are healthy and fit you can't be ugly.I said fit not skinny,a huge difference!So I found this a very human and humaine story.Yey for you for writing it.Again the Nar/Sas sex was dreamy.I like it cause it centered on his reactions.It was about him giving in/out/up!

That's depressing I read this fic before it got deleted, and I was going to read it again tonight be It's gone TT_TT. I hope that you will be able to rewrite it or maybe someone saved it for you, cause this was an awesome itachi/sakura fic.

Whoa. Dude... What the HELL are you on? I doubt it's just shrooms, crack, heroin, ice, or whatever. I don't think they have it even in Amsterdam!!! O_O;;;

And no... Sorry, I can't agree with you on that point coz I just HATE it when husbands cheat on their wives when they're pregnant. That's like, when their self-esteem is super low, ya know? "I already look AND feel like a FRIGGIN' BEACHED WHALE because of YOU, and there you go have my Ex shove his WANG in your ASS?!?!?! WTF?!?!?!" I read this fic where Sessoumaru cheats on Rin with her nanny (GAWD... why does that sound SOO familiar?!?!? *LOL*), and I've HATED stuff like that with a passion ever since. It sickens me, it pains me, it crowds my mind, it HURTS-DAMMIT-IT-EFFIN-HURTS. *curls up in foetal position*

Yes, I'm the kind of person who cries in sad movies. ;_;

Umm... this is an honest to goodness review. But like all perfectly honest criticism/review/whatever, will probably be hard to take:

I really don't see Sasuke acting like some kind of cheap whore. He's not. *pouts* I have a soft spot for the poor little rich boy.

And truthfully, Naruto feels kinda... not like a real person in here. I'm not talking about the Kyuubi. It's like, he's just a generic seme, that's all. No real depth to the character.

I'd leave my email so we can rap some more, but I don't want spider-bots finding it and spamming me with pr0n. -_-;

Correction: I *can't* see Sasuke acting like some cheap whore.

Sorry about that.

Waaaa! My review, it got deleted! T_T Sobs! Worse yet, that friggin' hot ass chapter got deleted. This site has taught me a lesson over the years, anything you want to post... SAVE IT FIRST!!! After the 3rd unsuccessful attempt of one of my stories about 2 years ago, I got REALLY pissed, but finally learned to save everything first. You poor thing, I should have shared that wizdom with you. Gomen.

ZOMG ROF, you are terrible! I thought you were serious with the Kaka/Anko thing. O_o; Sorry, I didn't read the rest of the chapter, cuz I am not into Yaoi. But, hey I ain't complaining, there is such a huge calling for it out there. YUCK! LMAO. I wrote the next chapter of Hiasobi, but I am being weird about posting it, maybe you could take a looksee over it and see what you think? mail me if it is ok. Wow, how'd it get to be 3am, I'm gonna oversleep in the morning I know I am. Huggles and ttys.

Great. Husband regularly cheats on PREGNANT wife with another guy. SasUKE. X( You've completely crushed my hopes of finding SasuSaku in here. ;_; Just shoot me, and end my misery now. -_-

Cool. But I want MORE SasuSaku lemon! There isn't enough of those. This place is just flooded with waay too much Sasuke in yaoi lemon! URGH! SasuSaku 4 EVA! *waves banner like a lunatic*