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for The prince(ss) and the Pea(nis)

by sooky

schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so freaking funny. I loved it.
=)
person oohshiny
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story!! even if it was intended to be a 1-shot, you should add another, short chapter to wrap things up, like naru-chan being revealed and stuff. if you decide to do so, email me plz? my email is deannathx@comcast.net
person losthimagain
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!! Could you please write more *looks hopeful* PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
person Crystal
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very funny! I liked it lots, couldn't stop laughing.
person Foxy\'s Wife
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was really a turn on! It made my eyes glued to the pc and read it over again! I still can't believe that this is a one-shot.(w/c is dissapointing) Can't you make another chapter of it?? I like this story!! ^^ It was funny and oh! theres love in the air... ROMANCE!!!! O_o; lol

anywayz, i expect you to continue this and period.
person sa-chan
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!Bravo!
person Kritiker
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was unbelievable~! one of the best Parodies I've read! It was positively hilarious all out!! ^o^
“There was something in my bed that kept poking me all night, especially my butt I couldn’t even sleep." Yep the pea(nis) [Gyahahaha!!] I near choked myself laughing so much ^^;;; Great humour! Great humour~ Hope to see more of your fics ^^
person dyingstar-elipsis
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, i really think its quite good. it's really quite funny ^^ I love fairytale!naruto ^^ Thanks for writing this.
person Seraphix
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I love this piece. Excellent humour, and the characters are so nicely slotted into the figures in the fairytale. Lovely writing too! Hoping to see more from you soon. =)
person Lanier
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA, That was darn funny. Is there more? anyway, great story.