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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good.
I like how it's building up to the grand moment.
And how the author created a reverse of the situation with Sasuke and Naruto XD
Good stuff.
I like how it's building up to the grand moment.
And how the author created a reverse of the situation with Sasuke and Naruto XD
Good stuff.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, ha Sasuke and Naruto cute couple if you ask me^_~ not to mention Ino and Te! I can't wait to see what you throw in next to keep us fans waiting ok lol. Ja ne for now...
love,
Majia
love,
Majia
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh la la. Lovely and bittersweet. Just what I was in the mood for, and done so well too! Know that you've got one fan, at the very least.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*goes starry-eyed* Ooohhhh! I really like this! Naruto fandom is indeed lacking in good yuri stories (something that saddens me greatly), and I always love to see it when authors give it a shot.
This is cute, hot, funny, and sad all rolled into one story, with smooth transitions for each emotion. Not too many people can pull that off well, but you've done marvelously. I would really like to see another chapter, but I (probably) won't result to begging (that's a lie) if you decide to not continue it. And also, thank you for pointing out something that has been bugging me ever since I first entered this fandom-- Sakura's obvious lack of... well... curves. People are always putting into their stories how "sexy" and "seductive" she is, and while that may be to some extent, I'm glad to see a story that flat-out rejects that idea.
(Temari and Ino are the sex)
Umm... Hmm. Well, I think I've pretty much run out of things to say. o_o;
Again, THANKS! Every contribution to the yuri-ness is a very welcome addition in my book! I do HOPE you continue it, because I would love to see some more Temari-Ino lovin'.
Jaa!
~~Keera
This is cute, hot, funny, and sad all rolled into one story, with smooth transitions for each emotion. Not too many people can pull that off well, but you've done marvelously. I would really like to see another chapter, but I (probably) won't result to begging (that's a lie) if you decide to not continue it. And also, thank you for pointing out something that has been bugging me ever since I first entered this fandom-- Sakura's obvious lack of... well... curves. People are always putting into their stories how "sexy" and "seductive" she is, and while that may be to some extent, I'm glad to see a story that flat-out rejects that idea.
(Temari and Ino are the sex)
Umm... Hmm. Well, I think I've pretty much run out of things to say. o_o;
Again, THANKS! Every contribution to the yuri-ness is a very welcome addition in my book! I do HOPE you continue it, because I would love to see some more Temari-Ino lovin'.
Jaa!
~~Keera
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute! I wouldn't mind seeing a Temari/Ino lemon :)