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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINISH THE ENDIGN! XD PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE HURRY!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O *wails* WHERE'S PART TWO???
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finish it finish it finish it!!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant. I really loved it. I dont know if there is any more of a perfect Naruto plot. Please do continue. i wait for the second chapter.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, update!!!!!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!!!!!! I cant breath... no really! I need my asthma meds for this! .... Oh you HAVE to update this! please please please please Ohhh I usualy am a very laid back reviewer I try not to push and be anoying but man I HAVE GOT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!! for a first fic, your amazing I loved every second of this!! please oh for alll that is holy in the universe I cannot wait for the next chapter this is soooo going on recomended reading!!! Wow wow wowowowowowo *passes out* ok... its a few minutes later... im good... GReat job And I soooo hope you update soon! Amazing job! Great fic... great ...well everything... sorry if this review is annoying im just in that phase of body where you find a truly great fanfic after hours of looking! man ok im going to stop typing right now...
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First Naruto fic? I'd have to say, it is magenficantly well executed. The plot is excellent as well as the characters playing right into their role. Interesting idea you have thought of, I would like to know what would be the outcome of this story. I hope you'll update soon, it'll be a great shame if you don't. I'd say this fic is one of a kind and I intend to remember this one ^^. Please email me once you've updated it so I can review, you've got a great taalent for this.
-Elk
-Elk
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice twist there. I liked it a lot. Can't wait to read the next part.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... If Itachi was going to fuck Naruto that would be why and how he did it. Finally, someone got it right :P
This looks like it'll be good. I look foreword to more.
This looks like it'll be good. I look foreword to more.
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL for some reason i found your fanfiction to be hilarious -.-;; how ever ur twist in the plot makes it a lovely story and the exquiste use and choice of words really made it enjoyable. the more variation the more better! go the theasaurus!