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for Captured in Your Eyes

by SuishouTenshi

person sas
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yesh~!! I"ll review ! ! ! I love your stories as usual!!! Welcome to the Naruto world!!
Man, can't wait for your next update... And so happy that you're writing sasunaru ficcies...

Till next chap,
Sas
person Gingitsune
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Naruto thought that it was Sasuke all that time?! Poor Naruto!!!!! I wonder what Sasuke will do now that he has discovered his own feelings as well as Naruto's feeling for him. A wonderfully intriguing story. More?
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was real good. Poor naruto~chan. I cant wait for the next chapter ^^
person leasan
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
geez...That was intense... Angsty and sexy.
I can't wait for the next part.
person FireFly
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a very good ficcy indeed! Interesting twist too. I'm certainly enjoying this and your writing talents are some of the best I've come across so far. Please update soon!
person fnw
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Outstanding. Superb. _______. (<- insert any synonym for aforementioned words in the blank)

Normally any Itachi/? pairing gets a bit squicky for me, but Naruto thinking it was Sasuke all along was just beautiful. And perhaps I'm being overly optimistic, but I hope this has a conventional "happy ending" - because seeing poor Naruto all broken like that is so hearbreaking. ;___;

PLEASE TRY AND UPDATE SOON. I'll be watching for this fic! ^__^
person macy
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a great first naruto fic!!! wow...that was powerful. i can't believe itachi can be so cruel!!! next part's the ending? umm..please don't kill off sasuke or naruto ^^;; that would just be really sad!! but then again, i have this feeling i'll love the fic regardless of what you end up doing with it. again, super awesome work. i am loving the angst and am looking forward to the conclusion. thanks!
person Rai-Chan
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter, poor naruto
This was an awsome chapter with a very hot lemon more soon please!
person liankitty
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was interesting and I definately didn't see the twist coming! The writing was awesome and the sex scenes were so hot but the twist definately made this more of a story than just smut. I definately want to read more! Thanks for writing!
person Yaoi Fan
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Absolutely wonderful!!! There's no words to express how great this fic is. Please update. I want more! The sex's hot. You'll be in my favourite list from now on. Keep up the good work!