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for Captured in Your Eyes

by SuishouTenshi

schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O this is coool!!! you shouldn't beat around the bush! update!
person eris
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really beatifull
Again another Naruto torture fic, but finally a well written one. Itachi is really a bastard, always causing problems to Sasurin and naruchan T.T I hope it has a happy ending, you can´t make them for long can you? ._.
So...Why did Naruto scream at the final part? I didn´t understand, was it the shock? hmm...I will have to read it again.

Please uptade soon ^-^

person LadyApollonia
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I mean this in a PURELY complimentary way... THAT SUCKED!!!! OMG!!!! Poor Naruto! I just want to hug him & make him happy again! Gah! That sucks! Itachi is such a FUCKING BASTARD!!!! I mean, I knew he was a bastard, but THAT........ That is just wrong. You did such a good job capturing Itachi's bastardness. That was a fanfastic fic. I can't wait until there's more.
person Akume
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is such an exquisite story. I can't wait for the following chapter. Ne, will Naruto be able to call on Kyuubi's power if Sasuke defeats Itachi in a months time or is his state permanent? Just curious. Well keep up the good work and update soon. Ja.
person caringbear2
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good first fic. I enjoyed it.
person Lalala
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I eagerly await the next chapter.
Poor Naruto, such emotional trauma. That'll take years to get over completely.
person Trekiael
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! We know it's Itachi who fuck Naruto from the beginning, but the look he give Sasuke, and how he seems so hypocrite but also gentle and submissive make it confusing. It's weird he would accept Itachi to be fucking him like that. When Sasuke saw the scene, it almost made me puke, so I can only imagine what Sasuke felt. I nearly wanted to beat Naruto in a bloody pulp for that. But then we understand everyting, and we understand Naruto's point of view, which is worse than Sasuke's, and shit, that is really horrible, and we understand his distress. Itachi really is not a bastard, no, bastard is a sweet word from Naruto to Sasuke, I don't know how to qualify him in english, as you don't have so many insult, but in french I would call him a "saloperie d'enfoiré", and now Naruto can't use Kyuubi's power properly and we understand why it didn't like what Itachi was doing to his host. Well, good luck for the next chapter, make it be as good as this. Oh, and congraculation for making Sasuke kill Orochimaru, I always wished it was like that he left him. Ja ne!
person Lanier
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was increadible. so intense and sad. I cant wait for the conclusion.
person Hinata-chan
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! THAT WAS THE HOTTEST THING EVER!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEE GIVE US MORE!! I LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DO!!! =) great fic btw xD
person yurathewicked
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!!

OMG.

this story is REALLY good. please update soon! *fangirl squee* your writing style/grammar and your plot line... *sigh.

i love you. i really do.