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I really enjoyed reading thins. Kisame's who attack on Itachi had me thinking. I pity Itachi and the over civilized cultured life he lived which resulted in Kisame raping him.

Poor Itachi.

OMG!!! This is one of the best Kisaita fics I have ever read. I'll be waiting anxiously for updates!

Please, please, please! I would love to see an update on this! I loved the style of this, so brutal and chilling. I can't wait to see what happens next to poor Itachi-san!

Good luck with your writing!

the description was great, and I love your writting style. Kisame was so cruel! Wahhh! Great job, you should write more.

-Grace

I have a suggestion for a one shot that I think you may be interested in, and it's not often found. By the way, rockin' story. The idea I want to propose to you is Kisame/Sasuke BDSM, bondage, rape yadda yadda. *Winks* The works. think ya up ta it? E mail me back with the answer please. I'd like to read it if you do it when you're done.

Please, PLEASE, finish this someday! I don't know how many times I've read it since I've started haunting this site. It's great as a one shot but the summary promised me Uchihacest! Uwaa! I want to know what you had planned!

Okay! So you know of my recent obsession between these two and today i did a search for the Ita/Kisa stories i used to have in my faves so i could go back and see how others interpret the pairing and such, and you KNOW that this is where most of my inspiration came from. Well, at least in the ideas that you've tackled with this story...(even though i know I have read a lot more of it than everyone else because i have your old master file! *gloat*gloat* MWAHAHAHA!) Anyways, I saw this one and remembered that you, in fact, have not even updated this at all!! WTF! Come on now. I know you have lots of content, AT LEAST enough for chapter two. I just love how you explored Itachi's aversion to pain and the way you make Itachi become totally submissive. Your ideas are quite inspiring! Come on Sick! On with the blood and puppies you tease!!! Don't MAKE me go review Dead Brother again!!! *snort* Plus, look at the responce you have gotten with just the first chapter. This deserves further concideration.

Okay, off to do something else...

XD

I can do nothing but sing praises for this fabulous work of art. You say that this was your first try at a domination fic? Well, you must have an incredibly analytical mind to be able to so well capture the emotions behind the need to dominate. Primarily, it is so one can feel superior. Many domination fics tend to focus more on a character's desire to posess another. (For example, the word "mine" is drastically overused in many d/s storylines) While I agree that the idea of 'possessing another' is what makes for great d/s relationships (smut), many authors tend to forget that the root of that desire is usually backed by some need to feel superior to others. Which is why I liked this story so much. Itachi's arrogance drove Kisame to prove himself with a VERY hardcore lesson. And what a lesson it was!! (excuse me while I fan myself for a moment) Because it wasn't just about sex, it was about total annihilation. Well done! That stuffy pretty-boy had it coming to him! I also liked how you showed the 2 sides to Kisame. First, showing total control with that which Itachi thought inferior to him (boorishness), and then becoming a servant (tending to him) with that which Itachi thought he lacked (civility). Talk about a real mind-fuck.

Thumbs up on the dialogue and characterization, too. The dialogue was actually spectacular. Kisame is a grown man and a killer, and he sounds like one. His words are strong, damaging and experienced. Also, I do think it's better with an in-character Itachi. It just makes the whooping that he receives that much more delicious. Take that you arrogant prick! And I like how you can relate this to a Naru/Sasu relationship as well; monster vs. genius. Kisame's right, having to work hard for things does make you stronger. That's why I like Naru-seme stories; that, and I like to see arrogant pricks begging on their knees for sweet mercy that they will never receive.

If I knew how, I would recommend this fic for an award. Alas, you will have to settle for being one of the few that make it to my favorites list. Thank you, I will enjoy this again and again, and I look forward to reading your other works.

I'm sorry, and then I go through some of your reviews and I get to the little puppy review... Is this the stuff you normally do? I think I'm in love.

That.........was........awesome!!Please update soon.