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Update!!!!! You said a few more chapters....

This sound really good. I hope you update soon.

Funny,i never thought of Itachi as someone unable to endure pain...of course there is pain and there is pain!!!!!!(the kind that lasts for months or years) and there is nooo doubt it changes you and makes you beastly and once its over(oh but the memory never goes away) you do despise those who have not survived it also,it is one of the major differences in perception between the young and the old).Somewhat.It also makes you empathetic..no matter how unpleasent the person if they have been wounded harshly or crippled you understand them some what.It certainly makes heroin adiction understandable,however in the end its ilegality brings more pain(whats with that anyway,why is it illegal?...if it was perscribed think of how many lives would go so much smoother and less crime,less violence,less bad parenting..its sick in a way,its legal in England,you can teach school and be on heroin)End rant.So sorry!POOOOOOr Sasuke ,what the hell is gonna happen

you haven't updated in a looong time... plz update! It's very good!

I've never read a Kisame fic before; nice job! I like some of the things you came up with, like how Itachi wouldn't have much exsperience with pain because of his natural talent, and Kisame's pride. I would love to see Itachi try to metally torcher Kisame with his Shringan (do what he did to Sasuke, and make him relieve his past, but its ends up with Itachi disturbed by Kisame's childhood!) Just a suggestion...
Well, it was very interesting and a good story to test imagenation (of a dark nature). = )

Oh my, you haven't updated for such a long time.....I hope you do. Want to know what will happen to Itachi ^___~

OSM! OSM! I LOVE YOU LIKE I LOVE BLOOD OSM! WTFBTW, WHERE IS CHAPTER 2?? WHERE IS THE RECOMMENDED FOR POSTING SECTION OF HIGHLIGHTED YELLOW SMUT THAT I JUST KNOW MUST BE IN THE CHAPTER 2 THAT YOU HAEN'T SENT TO ME YET!!! WHERE? WHY? *bashes face until blood spurts out* Oh! Whew! I feel calmer now...now i think I'll go review DeadBrother again and yell at you for not posting the contuation in which i know there will be some seriously fucked up occurances. *sigh* DAMN YOUR EDUCATION! DAMN MY EDUCATION! DAMN US BOTH! UPDATE DELERIUM!!!! *faints*

I like your portreal of Itachi in this fic, not to mention that Kisame is one of my favorite characters. I look forward to reading more! (soon I hope!)

Ohhhohohoh now this one was a sparker~<3 Lord knows why, but Itachi being made the total and complete bitch(in the physical sense XDD) out of nowhere just makes me smiiiiiile. :) <-- SEE? YOU SEE IT?
Don't get me wrong, either. I adore Itachi, and anything KisameXItachi gets my attention pronto. But this was such a nice little dip into something new, rather than the usual tame(ish) sex things you see around with the pair. Itachi getting totally and completely OWNED is hawt. XD

YAY FOR RAPE, VIOLENCE, AND ALL THINGS IMPROPER. ¦D

D:... My whole freakin' 5:00 a.m. blabbery novel of a review didn't post. HOW GAY IS THAT.... So I'll sum it up, since I'm too tired and incapable of remembering what I put. *sob xD*..... LOVE. LOVELOVELOVELOVEVLGND*Seizes*RAWR. *Insert a politely-toned voice explaining the good and the bad and the joys of rape and violence and improper things etc. etc. Yaddyblah.*.... Well basically, anyway. I'm just automatically in love with this one because it's such a different tone of KisaIta compared to the other tame(ish) sexable fics of the pair. Itachi getting totally beat and OWNED is hawt. ¦D Yaaaaaaaay~... Oh yeah, and now I need to include the cliche begging-for-more-on-one's-knees bit. *Does it. Does it.* X3