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for Body Over Mind

by onesickmind

person rachael
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O___O....SASUKE!! RUN! RUN FAST AND DON'T LOOK BACK!!! ACK!

Sasuke: Hn.

FINE YOU COCKY BASTARD!! IT'S YOUR ASS, NOT MINE!!

I really like this idea and the whole exploration of the psyche with Itachi. Besides, after reading so many fics where Sasuke gets brutalized by the bastard, it's nice to see Itachi get a taste of his own medicine. But then there is something awfully nostalgic about Uchihacest......oh dear. I think I'm getting twisted...

Well, anywho, you say you have more chappies, so get hopping and get them posted! Pretty please?
person M. Life
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really looking forward to the next coupla parts. I loves me some abused Itachi, especially if Itachi eventually turns around and takes it out on Sasuke. Or, hey, Itachi and Kisame on Sasuke. That'd be very, very hot.
person hunn3y
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A lil to violent for me, buh overall i likedd;] very niceee
person Dead
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAH! You! YOU! YOU COULD HAVE SAID "BOOYAH! I UPDATED" BEFORE YOU PUNCHED ME!!! *hanaji* grumble grumble...(That was kind of a turn-on.) And then you didn't even tell me that you posted THIS! I thought you were takling about something else, and then i get here and see it and i was all...WTF? and then there was glee and i read it again! YAY!!! I was all thinking you weren't ever going to post it!!! Okay time for a proper review: Cool title? Check! Excellent premise? Check! Itachi getting tortured and raped? CHECK! CHECK! CHECK! XD *glitter* and of course the blood...ah.... OH! So did you choose your adventure yet?? I can't wait to see what you came up with for this!!! Will it be...more torture?? Will there be a puppy? Let's see the puppy! XD yellow!! Yellow! YELLOW!!!!!! do you even know what i'm talking about??
Bah...I'll leave you with this: HARDER! FASTER! MORE! Please master? (O.O)
person Dead
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so i skipped the summary...and i just seen it now... (O.O) *NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Uchiha-cest!!!! Is it orange citrus?? *twitch* *twitch* *faint* *twitch* *twitch*
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Itachi *IS* the puppy, you fool!
person as i fuck up my own reviews...
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...A panting, whimpering little puppy that shivers in the corner with his tail between his leg until his master calls. A cute little pupppy with a loveable little face that has a wet tongue inside that is under his master's command. A warm, wet little puppy who's too weak to resist the huge hands spreading his obedient hind legs. A puppy that crawls around his master's feet on all fours, rolls over, pisses, and barks on command, and screams. A puppy who begs and obeys. A puppy formerly known as... Uchiha Itachi.
person Oboro
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I've been waiting for a believable KisamexItachi fic!! This is an excellent start so far, and they were both in character as well. The torture/rape was brutal too, just what I'd expect from ya ^_^ Amazing writing as usual, and I can't wait to see where this story goes!