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by Callisto

person KJ
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice! Good choice of characters and all. Though you might want to brush up on dialogue and throw in a couple extra members of the Rookie 9 to mix it all up. Other than that, absolutly fab!
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purrs* Hmm...I love your story...tell me something though...why am I the bad guy here? Ah you don't have to answer, but update soon...ciao darling!

x_Kyuubi_x
person losthimagain
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want--no NEED more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-The Update Moster
person Majia
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! WHO IS GONNA KICK WHO'S ASS!! WHO'S GONNA WIN! WE NEED SOME MYSTICAL POWER TO HEAL SASUKE! ...sorry i'm just excitedO.O i want to know what the hell is gonna happen next. Will Kakashi -squeals- kick Sasuke's -glomps- ass or vice versa?!?! You must let us know, or Kakashi could be secretly trying to help them escape...i must know@.@ tell me.....please*.*
person ku
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going with this, I really love it ^^
person Billy
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YeaH!
YayyyyyyyyyyyyYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 tHAT WAS THE BEST MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
HEHE :3
person Billy
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good!!!!!!
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person hypnotic
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no...please update soon. I wanna save naru-chan! awww please hurry!
person chi no hana
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww this is saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad... why is kyuubi so evil? oki, he's always evil, but why that much! and what are sasuke's methods? i wanna know!