rate_review Reviews

First off let me tell you I love your writing style it's very real and draws you in. It's lovely. Now as for the fic I like it I really do and then I don't like it. I like it because it shows Iruka is not perfect and that the boy has some angst. I don't like it because even though Iruka has been through some horrible stuff he's still Iruka and I would hope that would mean he would still stick up for himself a little. I'm hating that he turns into this weak helpless creature whenever the masked ANBU in around that he can't even defend himslef against the guy's advances. I thought he wanted to get away from Mizuki who seems controlling but the masked ANBU is starting to get that vibe too at least to me. The sex scenes between the two were at first really hot now they are getting forcful and boarding on rape, again that's how it appears to me. But this fic is so dramatic and it does have it sweet aww moments that I keep coming back for more. I love the update fillers are always nice. I can't wait to see more.

OMG! But I love your writing style and I love this fic!!! It almost had me wondering though if Iruka was going to get AIDS. T_T Sad day if that happened. But yay! He hasn't. lol! That's nothing to laugh about, but...meh. I'm looking forward to the update for this. X3 This so great!

nice story! really love it! usually i just read sasuke and naruto stories but this is reall good!

hells yeah!!! more smut! possesive smut even!! hah! love it :D

Please up date soon im diein here!. I luv eit so come ooooooonnnnnn!!!. PLEASE

a rash my rear end...yeah, sure Iruka, just keep telling yourself that. I loved it. Keep it up. Iruka is digging himself such a deep hole that Kakashi should be able to use it as a bribe for years worth of sex.

Needs major editing done to it with all the spelling and grammer errors. You have a good plot though and your lemons are great.

Why don't people realised Naruto used rasengan,taught by Jiraya and sasuke doesn't heal like Naruto,who has a demon fer %$#& sakes!The Sanin left leaf after tragady in their lives,how com Sasuke can't?I know,to Oro but really,why wasn't Itachi being dealt with?I think the whole massacre is a sham of some sort.

i'm hooked.better reveiw next time,i'm too late as it is.....

OMGYOUUPDATED!!!! *squees insanely* I LOVE YOU *tackle/glomps* i just checkk aff.net saw saw there were 3 more chapters and i bounced around my room ^^ poor kakashi and poor very confused iruka, all these chappies are just getting better and better. and its okay that there is no smut, because there will most likely be a good amunt of smut later on *pokes you* >:D