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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, you've caught my interest ^_^
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THis is great havent even seen this till lookign at your profile
Im glad I did to I love this just like I lvoe your last one please
pleas please please please pleaseeeeeeeee cntinue both of them.
Im glad I did to I love this just like I lvoe your last one please
pleas please please please pleaseeeeeeeee cntinue both of them.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! Like the first chapter, you get points for originality (to tell you the truth, I like the cliches. Hehe.)
However... I have somewhat of a problem with their ages... To be a doctor you normally graduate from highschool(say you're 18), then go to University for four years(22), then go to med school for four years(26) then do at least a two year residency(28-30)... so by the time you get out of everything, you're going to be nearly thirty or older... but if you aren't aiming to be realisitic then it's fine, I suppose. Just thought I'd point that out.
Thats all! Keep writing!
Amanda
However... I have somewhat of a problem with their ages... To be a doctor you normally graduate from highschool(say you're 18), then go to University for four years(22), then go to med school for four years(26) then do at least a two year residency(28-30)... so by the time you get out of everything, you're going to be nearly thirty or older... but if you aren't aiming to be realisitic then it's fine, I suppose. Just thought I'd point that out.
Thats all! Keep writing!
Amanda
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your great reviews, people! They really help to keep me inspired. I'll update it as soon as I can, I promise! And well Amanda... to tell you the truth, I don't know ANYTHING about doctors, hospitals or stuff like that, so I made a stupid mistake there, yes. Or... we can just say that they all were VERY quick learners...or something... xD *goes off to hide in a dark corner*
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! this is sooooooooooooooooooo good! this is the practical first encounter!!! let's make a deal; i'll hurry up with the update of Rainy Day if YOU hurry up with the update of ths one!!!!! okay?!