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person Inuzuka
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I came.
person oohshiny
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OO
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HOLY. CRAP.
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THAT was SO HOT!!!!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for NZ English. I loved this story, laughed so hard while reading it. I wont be able to keep a straight face the next time I get pulled over by the cops, all I'll be able to see is Naruto in a pair of orange stubbies and wifebeater.
PS - Christchurch a big city???? Pwaaaaah (OK it's bigger than Dunedin, I think)
person Rosebud
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was HOT! XD I loved it!
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. Im suprised that no one them. Nice story!

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person blue
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..just wow that. was..whoa im sorry i nevered read such an entence sasukexnaruto lemon before. to me thats perficinal yaoi work there. if you can write more i want to know if they get busted by iruka or kankashi. that would be so funny if they justed walked in after the after-math!^^ bravo!
person naruto'zsmexyfan
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
i.. luved the .. details
*inner thought*: "omg that made naruto and sasuke so friggin smexy, i hope i see more righting from this well.. writer. OH JEESE! dear friends please forgive the devious-pleasurable thoughts going through my head right now!
GOSH I THINK BOTH OF THEM R SO FRIGGIN SMEXY!
person Jadebyrd
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so freakin' HOT!!!
person Ameela
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet lemon, haha good au idea. you forgot one thing. iruka and kakashi! don't they wonder?
person Gold Silk
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow O.O