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Cool fic. I like the idea of small time Naruto and big city Sasuke. Those two lil' subconscious on Sasuke's shoulder'll drive him crazy pretty soon. Wonder which one he'll listen too? (grins) Grammar's okay, but the translated version has some strange symbols and wierd computer characters that distort the words, but you probably can't do anything about that. Yeah, love it, keep it up!

WTF is a Nartutard?! Seriously, the 1800 Narutard thing during the changing of the scenes is annoying. -_-;
Anyway, this story was highly entertaining! So funny, and Naruto is torturing Sasuke, and he doesn't even know it! XD
So is next chapter doing to give us some lemony freshness? Huh, huh? *wink - wink - nudge - nudge*
Hope so. So can you send me an email when you update? That would be really cool if you would. Thanks!

yay this was a very different and long chapter :(
i really wanted to see what Neji was going to do to Naruto oh well maybe on the ff.net :P
nice chapter Sasuke's a real perv lol
update when u can

Please update soon! This is a hilarious story!!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I wanna see Sasuke rape Naruto!! Hehe keep up the good stuff!!

xDD The ending is funny. "We got handcuffs" xD Please update soon. =3

I couldn't finished reading the second chapter becuase despite how much i enjoyed the story so far, there seems to be odd symbols and whatnot with in the story and they do seem to be somewhat distracting. Other then that, good job;D

Update! For I command it! .......please? *loves*<3

THANK YOU to everyone that has reviewed! i know i really loved getting all those positive responses all you readers and all the constructive critisim there is. (momo - i hope this second chapter explains the summary for this fic)

this was originally a one-shot and it will stay a one-shot fic by the end of the third installment which may/may not come. seriously, i'm thinking about not continuing this. i've already explained why the a/ns have been put in.

Einld and i have never intended to sound rude but that's why at the start we stated that you could "skip the notes". however, complaining to us again about it is something that is really starting to irritate me (somehow i get the feeling that Einld will be really pissed about this and won't want to finish the third chapter OR omake).

oh well. i'll *try* to appease Einld into just finishing as there's only one part to go but please. don't chew us out on the a/ns again. instead, give us some other critisim like how a sentence could be written better or this paragraph didn't make sense (don't ask us about spelling. we use the New Zealand English - expect some differences).

oh, and ghost - i know what you mean about that last sentence. we altered the ending of part 2 *just* so it would come off sounding just right! glad you liked it ^__^

also, i thought that au meant alternate universe. as in not set in ninja theme and sort of like in school setting or some other. and ae is alternate ending as in set in ninja setting with different ending to that in manga or anime.

or am i wrong? or getting confused? can someone clarify please?