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Cool this is fucking hularyus!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to up date soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

"Thus we didn’t want to bore our readers with mundane details and descriptions." ROFLMAO! That is friggin' hilarious on so many different levels! WTF?!

Anyway, funny fic. Not genius, not clever, but nonetheless gratifyingly amusing. [insert praise] Claps to you for the read.

Minus the cheesy angel sasuke and devil sasuke, sasuke's character is believable enough. The situation makes for video porn *snickers* that's not an insult! It's a compliment... sometimes it's nice to read SasuNaru fanfiction with no point or plot. At least I've enjoyed reading this!

Lastly, if you don't want to finish your fic, then don't... we'll live. It's not like you're dangling a read-or-die over our heads, so don't stress yourself too much trying to convince your partner to have mercy on undeserving readers *grins* Sorry if that sounds catty, but seriously... it's not the readers' fault that your comments are annoying and retarded.

XD...*laughs for an hour* ^-^ Write more soon! I love it! Please? <3

Yes! Longer chapter and ending diffrent. Of course I prefer this one. Angel Sasuke really is a perv, he just want to give himself a moral side that's obviously isn't working. Yhe thing about Sasuke having naughty tought about Naruto while he's in jail is very interesting, never seen this one. I always knew Naruto was sinfuly fuckable, even without wanting to be. And as Sasuke is a perv, I wonder of much more time he'll keep his self control. Well at least Naruto will have a good reason to scream "help! Rape! " this time, aven if it's completly his fault. But he won't be rape cause, come on, who in his right mind could object being fucked by Sasuke?? Well good luck for the next chapter!

ooo this is so hot!!! update asap!!!

keep up the great work love it ^.^

Me likey~ Please e-mail me when you UPDATE PLEASE!

Your story is starting out pretty funny.

Te only thing that throw's me off, is the explanation o things in the middleo f a story.

Some things I don't know, but I can either figure that out with context clues, or, an a/n at the end of the chapter.

I hope you don't mind constructive criticism...

The sotry goods, just the a/n's in the middle of stories bother's me, b/c it throws me off...

Keep going, though! :)

XDDDDDDDDDDD THAT WAS SO AWESOME. The last line was one to die for. XDDD the cherry on top. Kudos for you!

Ha- I like it! Yay, cage scene! ;) And I sense Kakairuka coming too... All my favorite pairings! Keep up the good work!