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by mischiefmaker

schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While I'm not traditionally a fan of m/m stories, there's something odly enjoyable about f/m/m ones. Perhaps in a perverted way, it the evolution of an extreme emotional connection. Oh well, you did a good job of implying a lot of ecchi content without getting graphic or crass.

Another thing is that it strikes me that Sakura really couldn't chose between the two of them! She's very open about her fealing for Sasuke from the start, but I could read between the lines even early on and see how she'd look at Naruto in the moments where he seemed so grown up (short though they were!)and blush. Then later, in Sasuke's absense, she seemed to gravitated towards Naruto from time to time.

As for the guys, well it doesn't surprise that two of them could have a relationship too (at least from the perspective of a perv like me).

Well, Good job
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to be a pervert toooo!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved this!!!! Nyah!!!
person niara01
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hot and sexy. Please do write more. i loved the scence when Sasuke told Sakura to peep properly.
person Mageblood
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is just so cute!!!!!!!
You should definently write more storys!!
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not even a yaoi fan and this had me laughing at the end of the chapter. Hilarious! :D
person ally2002
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story. there aren't many fics out there like this one. and maybe a little more detailed would be nice. i love the fact that she is just watching them. great start!
person Rian
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, a topic which not so many get into. Just how do you put up with being different in a society where conformity is so prevelent. And as always the gossiping can be cutting. Gonna do anything else?
person Morwen Re
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please, please, please tell me that there is going to be a sequel to this with some smut in it! please! you do a very good job of description...
person barby
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm... could u make a sequel?? or at least write a "session" between the three of them??
person Randomness
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness! Finally someone writes more Team 7 stuff! You hafta write more! Your Queen demands--er..haha...I think you get the idea.