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awesome story, I also read your others in this section and your originals section. I can't wait til you add to them. Do you think that when you do update an of them that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? my email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

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wow, soooo good. your naruto is spot on! and I totally see sasuke as the manipulative little shit he is. good job with the characterization and interaction. very very good....very.
ps. I wish you'd finish this story, coz I'd absolutely love to read it...email me if you ever do, and if you have the time of course.

wai~
continue!
^^

I must say, I do like this fic. I'm curious to see though if you will have this fic run a classic course only to conclude with a cliché ending or if you will twist it around a bit first to keep it interesting. I am certainly interested in seeing where you will take this fic.

nice story

I love it! Update asap ^.^ <333

Sasuke doesn't know what he wants. He needs to stop playing with people's hearts until he's sure that that's at lest what he wants! *sigh* Poor Naru-chan he must be so confused.

Yes that is better Naruto. you better not give in to him.

I don't know why but this is the first time I wish for Sasuke to be hurt really really bad! I hate people who use others feelings for their own sadistic idea's

and please grant this wish please let Naruto spit on Sasuke's face please i don't care when why or how i just want him to do it

love you writing i never felt this strongly about a story before hope there will be a happy ending to this story

love
looli :)

ah! Sasuke prick! >.< *stabs!*
Great fic, I like the idea behind it...sounds so Sasuke...actually, most of your characters are pretty in character....especially Naruto, what with his naivity and all ^_^
Super job! Cant wait for more!