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for Thwock! The Man Unmasked!

by chocmilkchan

schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh quite amusing! Looking forward to future chapters =)
person browneyes2yu
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, cause this is ONE GOOD STORY you got going here and it's awfully interesting. WHat was that crater anyway??? just wondering...how they could possibly do it, can't wait to read your explanation! Please update soon, with Kaka's face revealed and all the good stuff following. Thanks!
person azuuei
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahah! that was really amusing. =)
person Dylan Keller
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should make the detailed Sex part of Sakura and Kakashi i am a huge fan of this story MAKE IT MORE LIMONY!!!!
person Mija
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg I could just PICTURE Naru slamming right into the window and sliding down like some goopy mess..I laughed my butt off at that..and hmmmm wonder what that white umm yogurt/cream thing on Sasuke's cheek was?? hehehehe..too funny...and ooh Kakashi is soooo mean, he wont sign the scroll so they can be in Anbu..lol..cant wait for the next chapter, dont care if this was a filler, it was cute and funny, loved it ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Ruka
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is soooo hot, but please don´t leave it at this!
person LatinaTemptress
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That introduction was amazing...paper/rocks/scissors will never be the same again!! Great story, always keeping you guessing and...wanting more... yes. Love the accuracy of Naruto facts as well. A must-read for any Hentai lover!! If you are looking for a lemon, however, there is none, u pervs.
person krickets
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh blue you be nice no ripping out peoples windpipes
we castrate here at aff.net, they rip out windpipes only
over at FF.net

anyways LOVED IT! although i have to say there
were some paragraphs towards then end that could use some work.
altogther it was a beautiful piece!
i cant wait for an update i want to know what she saw past the genjutsu!
also that opening was AMAZING! mwa ha ha it made me titter
person Mija
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok so did Kakashi use a genjutsu to fake a plain face??? is it hotter or something?? uuugghh I have to know please update this fic, its really cute and I soo like the way they all teamed up to unmask thier sensei, hehe that was too cute loved it...update soon k?? ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person blueinferno
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol the last sentence made me laugh...update otherwise i will tear out your windpipe like jack the ripper :)