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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5:
I really like this dirty-talking Naruto that you've got. He's so much frickin' fun.
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I really like this dirty-talking Naruto that you've got. He's so much frickin' fun.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15:
Epic and funny. I greatly approve. And hardcore Naruto is almost as sexy as icy Naruto. And I really like Sasuke's mellowness in his reply.
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Epic and funny. I greatly approve. And hardcore Naruto is almost as sexy as icy Naruto. And I really like Sasuke's mellowness in his reply.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Ice Naruto is HOT.
I really adore that vibe of the three, it's fantastic. And good ol' Naruto, having no CLUE what's he doing to the other two. ...Or DOES he?
Nah, he doesn't.
I'm really like this.
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Ice Naruto is HOT.
I really adore that vibe of the three, it's fantastic. And good ol' Naruto, having no CLUE what's he doing to the other two. ...Or DOES he?
Nah, he doesn't.
I'm really like this.
-CR
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17:
Holy crap! That fan-flipping-tastic! I LOVE the setup, I LOVE the intrigue. And their characterization was to-die-for.
Beautiful!
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Holy crap! That fan-flipping-tastic! I LOVE the setup, I LOVE the intrigue. And their characterization was to-die-for.
Beautiful!
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18:
WHOA.
I love how Naruto is just over at Gaara's house, chatting away to Gaara. And add to that the fact that their both talking about something that they have NOT operationally defined. And Naruto's open-minded enough that, after a moment's thought, he's willing to go for it.
Double gold-star.
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WHOA.
I love how Naruto is just over at Gaara's house, chatting away to Gaara. And add to that the fact that their both talking about something that they have NOT operationally defined. And Naruto's open-minded enough that, after a moment's thought, he's willing to go for it.
Double gold-star.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i read 'my nuts', because i'm bored. i loved it. great job, it was just... i loved sakura's refusal to comment.~
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'idiots and stupidity'. that was good too. sasuke is so lame. he loves konoha so much, and he does care about naruto and sakura, no matter how much he pretends he doesn't. good ficlet.~
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the mermaid chapter- cute, not my fav of the three i've read, but cute.~
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
20- that which everyone else sees
nice. i love sasuxnaru, though it is definately over written. they are still my ultimate couple, and it was a cute piece.~
nice. i love sasuxnaru, though it is definately over written. they are still my ultimate couple, and it was a cute piece.~
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shino's b-day... that was sad. i was hoping for smexing. oh well.~