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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty cool and fun to read.
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is good. Very sad too. It's an open ending if I ever saw/read one.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is so good, it's hard for me to believe this is a first... CX
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greetings to whomever be reading this! Firstly, this story got posted twice so I deleted one, unfortunately, it was the one that had my first 2 reviews. So, thinking that that was a possibility I saved the reviews beforehand. I am going to post them here since they took the time to review, and because they rock for doing so. Thank you for the reviews by the way! I'm glad my first fic is going down well. By the way, the other post was at c.47 hits, so, thankyou as well to all those people who took the time to read my story.
Ruby
2005-12-06 id # 2035522692
Nicely written. I enjoyed reading this fic, the ambience was well done, the spelling and grammer were good, and the characters were in character. The only negative thing I have to say, is that the change between POV's was a little jerky, and may disrupt the reading. Otherwise, good job.
shinara 2005-12-06 id # 2035523029
OK!!!!!!!!!! that sure made my day!!! Makes a lot of sense when you see every hatred Sasuke-chan is showing in the episodes ^^
Y_Y It made me cry a lot todayyy ur soo evillll ;_; Naruto's response..*melts* Nooo I won't cry again T__T
Great work!!! You were able to make me cry and I don't cry that easily *sobs* *self-control completely falling*
Ruby
2005-12-06 id # 2035522692
Nicely written. I enjoyed reading this fic, the ambience was well done, the spelling and grammer were good, and the characters were in character. The only negative thing I have to say, is that the change between POV's was a little jerky, and may disrupt the reading. Otherwise, good job.
shinara 2005-12-06 id # 2035523029
OK!!!!!!!!!! that sure made my day!!! Makes a lot of sense when you see every hatred Sasuke-chan is showing in the episodes ^^
Y_Y It made me cry a lot todayyy ur soo evillll ;_; Naruto's response..*melts* Nooo I won't cry again T__T
Great work!!! You were able to make me cry and I don't cry that easily *sobs* *self-control completely falling*