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by UchihaSakura

person venia
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg,OMG...WOOOOH! I can't believe this. When I started reading the fic, 1st thing I thought was: 'that's a naive story about ANGST(which I can't stand 'cause it REALLY kills me XD eccept when i have to stand it 'cause the fic is good) and ULTRA-ANGST,period' (sakura feeling tragically hurt, everyone crying here, she loses her father, kakashi-sensei dies too O_O; wtf is there anything else to add? some natural disaster maybe?). I was so about to cry with sakura going insane from the pain and Naruto wanting-her-and-not-being-able-to-confort-her and I started emo-ing myself.;___; so sad...but I just kept reading hoping it would be worth it.

That, and your narrative style showed some nice quality there. I liked the way you describe the character's thoughts and feelings, so neatly.

And then..then comes the second part of the fic. They somehow go live together. Sasuke can't understand how th'hell this happened, yet, they're there. Sakura begins healing slowly, being close to him-and that's enough for her to feel better. Naruto is still there(I am SO releaved you didn't throw him out, thank you...he's the best!)
Then Sasuke makes 'that' kind of dream after the nightmare. hohoho~ And Sakura caressing his hair *_*(kyahh) And eventually...one morning it feels like it's actually the first good day after years of darkness.

I felt my interesting about this story raising bit by bit with every chapter, no scratch that, every paragraph XD In the last one I was like: noooo, it's coming to an end! Well, right now I'm so overwhelmed by this fic I just HAD to comment! I hope they can heal completely, no matter what they still have to go through and find the strenth to..to...did sasuke lost against sakura in sparring? yay! Well, I'm curious about the sequel now.

Update soon^^

person Max
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with you about sasunaru.
person Jenny
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH I LOVED YOUR STORY!!!! YOU SHOULD DEFINIETLY CONTINUE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT. I LOVE SASUSAKU!! THEY ARE MY FAVORITE COUPLE EVER! YOU ALSO MADE SASUKE COME BACK, BUT YOU MADE KAKASHI DIE!! NOT COOL! BUT AT LEAST THE COUPLE ARE BACK TOGETHER! PLEASE UPLOAD MORE!!
person Isha
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story cant wait for the next chapter
person Talho
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, looking forward to the next chapters :3
Only thing I found was a few spelling errors; but otherwise nothing wrong.
person Ari
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowow! =O I'm truely in love with this story, I read the whole thing extremely quickly because I just couldn't stop reading! xD Of course, I've gone over it a bit to make sure I didn't miss anything.. >w<;; Please update soon! I can tell the story is gaining momentum very quickly! *Love love* ¢¾
person Ari
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't you hate it when half of your review is missing? -_-;; Anyhoo, I love Sasuke and Sakura! xD They're soo cute. =3 I can't wait for Sasuke to finally give into his naughty sub-concious mind! Mwahaha! >:D
Please updat real quick, ;P I can tell this story is gaining momentum quickly! =3

Love, Ari.
person Raina
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Normally I'm not one to continually bug an author about updates. In fact unless it's Black Sheep, I never do. I've read this thing over several times and I can't get enough of it. Sure there's several grammerical errors, you tend to misspell words but I feel the gold of a great story here. You've really got your take on Sasuke nailed down, it's fairly astonishing the amount of nit picking and analyzing you've put into both him and Sakura. I would like to see how this progresses very much, I feel like this could go somewhere very interesting. There aren't too many fics out there I can say that about. I'd just like to know where you are with this right now. Should I get my hopes up or cry? ;) Thanks.
person LilyDraken
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an absolutely beautiful story! Please update soon! I'm totally enthralled with the relationship you've set up between them, and what a great job at capturing Sasuke! Please, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Yumi
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good GOD, you're a fantastic writer.