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by UchihaSakura

person tlq05
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there hasnt been many good fics been updated lately; so it was soo good to read this! it's just so awesome; please continue updating ^^;
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I've finished. I've read all eight chapters. I, of course, enjoyed the Sasuke/Sakura interaction most, but then that's probably to be expected of me.

Kudos to killing Kakashi, not because I dislike him or anything, I just love the drama of it.

'Sometimes he would lie to her on purpose, just to test her, tell her something that couldn't possibly be true.' I liked this part that you wrote. It seemed very appropriate, and spoke volumes on how he views Sakura... how curious she makes him. It's just like you said, a 'test'. He seems like he wants to see how much she actually likes him, how far she's willing to go for him. Her reaction to his 'test' is an affirmation of her feelings for him, in his mind anyway. I liked it. Clever, appropriate, and descriptive.

I will be waiting for chapter nine of course, but I'll give you the same courtesy you give me. Update soon, but not at the expense of your fic.

I swear I'm trying to update fast! My niece brought the flu, or some cold home, and I have it now. In fact, your fic. was my solace these past few miserable hours of sneezing, fighting a runny nose, stuffed head... It sucks to write when you're drugged up on Nyquil and miserable, but I'm trying. Anyway, thanks for the enjoyable reading!

person Sarri-chan
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Sasuke, you DOLT! Wake up and SEE THE GIRL!! Oh man...::shakes head:: your style of writing is so beautiful, but it can be so frustrating because of little mister Ice Prince. Please continue! I beg of you!! ::beg beg::
Yours evermore,
~Sarri

ps: Loved this chapter!! ^.^
person Cuito
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. I love this. I read the first chapter and I had to finish it all the way in one sitting. Beautiful story. I can't wait for more updates. ^_^
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I've only read the first chapter so far. I'm definitely going to read on.

You're right we do view a lot of things the same! The Naruto/Sakura thing especially it seems. She does seem the type of girl to give Naruto a shot even if Sasuke is still on her mind. She likes Naruto, thinks he's nice and a really good friend, but she'll always have it bad for Sasuke. At least so the anime shows! And we as fanfic. writers too! The practical side of Sakura will try to move on, but that irrational side wants the Uchiha.

I can't wait to read how you write Sasuke!

But damn... you update fast! Seven chapters in less than two weeks?! Unless you started writing it before you posted. But wow... give me lessons on how to update so fast will ya! As if it was possible. I'm afraid I'm doomed to be slow. Anyway. I loved the first chapter. I'm a sucker for good Sasu/Saku. and I'll be back, probably tomorrow, for more!
person Morwen Re
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! i lovew burping contests, even though if i get caught i get in trouble 'cause i'm normally the stotic one in my group.... good fic! i think you're doing a really good job on this and can't wait to read the next chapter! ja ne!
person blueinferno
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ano sa...ano sa...is Sakura a virgin? *puppy dog eyes* i HOPE she is XD...nice new chapter...the thing i like i about you is you update soooo quickly! awesomeness, i'm glad i encourage you too...i must comment on your writing style its very...unique? XD carry on with your awesome story! mwha!
person Sarri-chan
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke thought that dream was HORRIBLE??? Man, that guy needs laid. Anyway - kawaii chapter! Sasuke's gotta get used to his home being occupied by a pink-haired girl and the blonde idiot. ^.^ I can't wait to read more! Even if the story has possesed you to the point where you have no clue what the heck your writing. ^.^ Please continue!

~ Sarri
ps: I like hearing from you too! my e-mail's 'vampirekitten.seras@gmail.com' if you ever want to co-write a story or something. Or just to keep in contact! ^.~
person Sarri-chan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated!! ::hugs the author:: I cried when I found out Kakashi died, who knew you were going to pull that one! The fact that Sakura's father died is heartwrenching as well, and her mother kicked her out, Sasuke just broke her nose, and she couldn't be any happier. Well, she would be if Sasuke screwed her right and proper. But, anyway, you've GOT TO CONTINUE! This is such a good story, I'm printing what I can off and putting it in my Little Big Black Book of Sexy Stories. ^.^ Don't worry, all rights belong to you. I'm never gonna steal this! It's to good. ^.^
person Sarri-chan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how cute! Sasuke wearing Sakura's scarf that she made for him. ^.^ I don't mind the confusion. In fact, it was a nice little chapter. Full of the fluff that leads to the hot stuff! ^.^ Keep it going!