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for The Sun starts from the East

by viperduo

schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really funny. I hope you finish it some day.
person hisoka
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats cute and confusing,to change genders i mean.
updates?
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sweet. Soooooo funny.
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Please continue!!
person holly dermovoi
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww!!!! >,< wonderfull ending....but by all means continue!!!wat happens next
person Liz
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Buwhahahaha I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! It takes a lot for me to get hooked to a Naruto mpreg fanfic but this has caught my attention and i'm gonna stick with this story till it is finished!!!

*giggles* Such good work. Can't wait to read the next update. =D
person Saraste
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"a Sasuke in her best leather swiveling chair …" That was hilarious. Overall I like your fic as it's got humor in a way that the original has. The plot is also quite good. It's evolving quite nicely.
person tortilla lady
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!! i love kakashi!!
person anonymous
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick point. Sex-linked = carried on X or y chromosome, not X alone. In the majority of the cases the trait is indeed found on the X chromosome, however, there are the rare cases where it is found on the Y chromosome.
person chelzi
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww... ka-kun is so cute.
'doyouwanttomarryme?' absolutely adORable!!^^ i hope to see more of this story soon! i'll keep checking, it's really good.~