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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well.. this is new... ^^- I'd like to know where this leads.. ^%^- go on go on go on ^^- whee >.< please do go on ^^-
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and Iruka as girl....LOL!! it works, Sasuke already suffers from PMS and Iruka is a mother hen ^_^
Great fic, cant wait for more!
Great fic, cant wait for more!
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic has a really interesting idea, and I can't wait to see how it turns out. I'm hesitant to offer my own advice and opinions because I like to watch how the story unfolds on it's own with the voice of the author paving the way. I think you've been doing a great job keeping everyone in character, and with such interesting plot twists you always manage to surprise me! Please don't stop writing this fic!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, yummy!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I finally got a chance to read this fic for the first time... Dunno how I never found it before.... I really like this fic!! I do hope you'll update soon, but I'll understand if you need time to think. It happens a lot. Wonder if, after the operation, Iruka will start acting more motherly, especially in Naruto's presence?? After all, Naruto was kinda like a son to him, right?? muahaha.. wonder what his girl name will be.. Sasuke's "Saki", so Iruka.. hehehe.. good luck! Just don't let Kakashi pick it! lol!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SPLEEEEEEEEE! I love this story. It's so kawaii! *gives you a kakashi plushie and a naruto kitty plushie* merry christmas (just humor me)
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fanfic!!! Awsome story!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um.........that was weird O.O........Sasuke as a chick kind of scares me........think about how he would fight.......I mean he'd be pretty and all but *shutters* Sasuke with boobs!!!!!!!! That would be so scare and he wouldn't be the cold heartless basterd any more!!!!!!!!!! Grils just can't be cold and haertless like Sasuke so he'd be a thousand times more moodier!!!!! Scary O.O!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED to know what happends next!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
-The Update Monster
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet! I like it, and I think you're doing a really good job. It's mushy, but you gotta have a little mush now and then, ne? I've been reading the heavy angsty stuff lately and I have to say this is a wonderful sweet break from all the bondage, torture, and n/c...I'm a bit of a twisted egg, I'm afraid, but this just makes me go mush and I definitely appreciate it! I really want to read more. I loved the part where Sasuke's walls come down and he cries over his mom's kimono. You have a really good catharsis (expunging of emotion?...like why girls like to watch tear-jerkers from time to time; have a good sentimental moment to get it out of your system.)
With my praises laid, I was confused during the festival scene and this last one whether Sasuke was in the Sexy no jutsu or not. That gets a little confusing. I think Tsunade's characterization could use some tweaking, but really I like the mushy Sasuke and Naruto portrayals you have going. Maybe a little out of character but that's what fanfiction is for, right?
With my praises laid, I was confused during the festival scene and this last one whether Sasuke was in the Sexy no jutsu or not. That gets a little confusing. I think Tsunade's characterization could use some tweaking, but really I like the mushy Sasuke and Naruto portrayals you have going. Maybe a little out of character but that's what fanfiction is for, right?
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and I got a PSP for my B-Day yesterday!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Um........XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-The Update Monster
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